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Window View
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Window View

 

 

 

There’s a ragged sky to the west tonight

Subdued shades of pink-tinged blue

Lights of the city sparkle on one by one

Like erotic thoughts on naked view

Mind sparks of bits and pieces of prose

Tidbits of things I want to say or do

Trucks gearjaming down the interstate

Seem to roar by as if on cue

A heartache web of roadmaps west

On a blank sheet I just drew

Fighting the urge of rambling fever

I wonder if you feel it too...

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Window View"
Reviewed on January 29, 2011
"Like erotic thoughts on naked view

Mind sparks of bits and pieces of prose

Tidbits of things I want to say or do"

I love how this is the poets mind
constantly active & seeing through words
the voices of poetry live forever
Love & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
lol:) I wouldn't be able to concentrate with a noisy view. Some folks thrive on it. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Thoughts escaping in the night...keep on rambling!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
This sounds like the makings of a country song, Fee! And I bet you could put it to music too! Wonderful lyrical flow...great job as usual!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Feel it but can't see it other than in my mind image...e

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 27, 2011
Nicely done, Fee.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
What a lovely window view . I can see everything with your wonderful imagesl.
hug
Katy

Reviewed on January 26, 2011
Fee,

This is beautiful and so sad.

Mary

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
"Mind sparks of bits and pieces of prose - Tidbits of things I want to say or do." Fee, I just love the mind pictures your words paint and each new contribution seems to outdo the last.

Thanks Dick.


Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
I think it must be most beautiful up where you are. There is beauty and innate wisdom in your poem, Felix.
Be well,
Christine

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on January 26, 2011
"a heartache web of roadmaps west. . ."--we all can feel it. Who but you could say it so? Beautiful.


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