Her Secret (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 18, 2011

Love how you developed this story within a short poem, Fee. Sad. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on June 12, 2011

Fee, so sad?

I haven't read or written a poem in a long time. Came to AD to read some and maybe feel inspired. I started at the top of the new poems page. Ugh...I don't know, I think my poetry might have been pretty bad too, which might be why I stopped, but it wasn't until I got to your name that I knew I would find something really good. Something that is well written and evokes strong emotions. Thank heavens for you, Felix!

Be well,
Sara

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on June 9, 2011

such a sad write Fee
hug
kathy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 7, 2011

so sad-beautifully written!

Reviewed by Joy Hale

Reviewed on June 5, 2011

Oh, so sad... but many times true. Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 4, 2011

Heartbreking Dear Cuz. I loved each and every word. From your heart to ours as usual.

Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on June 3, 2011

this flows like a tear drop down the cheek.....but, a mystery to drown in too! intrigued. Morgan

Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo

Reviewed on June 3, 2011

Wow Fee - this one hit home!

God Bless You,
Deborah

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 3, 2011

Her secret is his secret: a tryst seemingly unresolved this side of heaven's ever open door but one which lives on in the hearts and minds of the two who are bound by it. As ever you speak beautiful poetry of the often inexpressible, Felix. You are expert in the matters of the heart. xx

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 3, 2011

To drown in heartache is truly painful, it happens all too often, your words are telling of a story and heartfelt~
Hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on June 3, 2011

Tragic writing.....so touching! There are far too many troubled souls in this world....Beautifully penned, Fee!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 3, 2011

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 3, 2011

Another truly sad piece, my friend.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 3, 2011

Beautifully written, Fee.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

ahhhh..very touching and so beautifully written...all your verses touch the heart.. You are a great poet, Fee :)best wishes.neerja

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

A sad message, but still a nice one as well...e

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

Brilliant and moving poem, Felix! I just love this one ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

A touching write Laura

Reviewed by Donna Chandler

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

Beautifully written with just the right amount of sadness and lost love.

Donna

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

Very touching indeed sweet Fee.......lovely writing as always...Hugsss

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

very lyrical...with such a sad message. Nicely done.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

very nice felix and i loved the flow

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on June 2, 2011

Ya, but what a way to go. She had just told him that she was having his baby and he drowned in happy tears when she said yes to his proposal. Least that's what I think..... Dick