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hagakure (a samurai's end)
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and now
as i ready myself
to face my death
my enemy stands
ready
and perfect


thoughts
since childhood
in preparation
for this moment
a sword
hanging
above my head
a lullaby


suckled
on mortality
and weaned
to be a vengeful
ghost


cold lightning
drawn
from the storm
on my hip
i ride the wind
onto the field
the name of my master
my only prayer


cherry blossoms
raining down
to wash away
my fear


and though
we both die
today
i find perfection
in my enemy
our mingled blood
making us
brothers


all life
a dream
this end
the only
reality


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 Reviews of "hagakure (a samurai's end)"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 28, 2005
Very deep, excelelnt write!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 27, 2005
we live and die by the sword ... exceptional poem ...

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on April 27, 2005
I especially like this stanza:
and though
we both die
today
i find perfection
in my enemy
our mingled blood
making us
brothers

Well done!

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on April 27, 2005
WOW this is a really great story

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 27, 2005
And here I stand-in the echo of this incredible poem-the sword of your words shine brilliant. Brilliant!

Reviewed on April 27, 2005
Alexandre,

Thought provoking and beautifully penned, this leaves me wondering, is the enemy...I?

Love your strong, vivid imagery. "Cold lightning/drawn/from the storm/on my hip" is particurly effective

WELL DONE!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)


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