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That Final Goodbye (5-7-5 haiku)
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Nothing is more painful that looking into the face of someone saying goodbye, when hope is gone and love lies broken somewhere under our feet...

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I couldn't see your face
when you were saying goodbye,
tears blurred my eyes.






  

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 Reviews of "That Final Goodbye (5-7-5 haiku)"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on July 7, 2008
JUST A FEW WORDS, BUT THEY BROUGHT TEARS IN MY EYES!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on May 21, 2007
Says it all in effective poetry, Georg: perfection.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 21, 2007
So much said with so few words my friend, nice haiku! The picture helps set the mood, a powerful write!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Oh Georg, how terribly heartbreaking! Her glaring stare speaks volumes without a word being spoken.....

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
sad, effective, finely penned ku ...
Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Very very sad and filled with emotions!

Her eyes in this pictured captured all.

Creative choice of words

Beautifully written poem.

Love And Peace to you always

Your friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
yes tis sad reality of life, summed up in three lines....wd.

ch'erie
Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Georg, the picture told part of the poem but the words captured it all! A great writing.
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
So very sad.

Chrissy
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
The face does speak it all and one last hand raised. Lady J
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Ah, Georg. This is so eloquent.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Sad..
excellent write...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Arrow shot straight to the heart! wonderful ku Georg!

Eileen
Reviewed by Nancy Meeks (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Hi Georg,
Good Bye's are so sad. What you wrote is so true, because we're trying so hard to see our loved one, but can't because our eyes are crying.
Thank You for sharing this with me.
Nancy
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
A sad but beautifully moving Ku.

Paul;-)
Reviewed by Guy Hogan
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Yes, yes, yes! I don't know if you realize this, my friend; but you've just written a perfect piece of flash fiction. And you thought you were a poet.
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Sad but so true, capturing your words with the powerful picture,

Thanks,
Dan
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
What an extraordinary emotion you have captured in the melding of this image and your thoughts Georg. I can so relate!

Light and Wisdom ...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
OMG....don't I know the feeling all too well.....I hate to say goodbye!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
THIS IS SO SAD AND IS HAPPENING ALL OVER THE WORLD.
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
Georg,
Goodbye's are so painful, my friend. You have expressed it perfectly in your verse and picture.

Many blessings,
~Linda
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
This is a perfect senryu, Georg. And the picture adds so much.
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
You have posted and penned a perfect poem of ku and the emotions expressed are well done with this truth many can relate to Georg.....
Peace,
Josie
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
The pic and Ku compliment each other in getting a sad point across.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 20, 2007
So powerfully sad, Georg.
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