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Our Heart & The Thorn
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Oh! that first and never corresponded love, the chrush, the panic, the sadness, the goodbye never said.

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A panicky little bird tried to hide
among white roses from a hawk
coming down from the skies
falling from the center of the sun.

The little bird wasn’t to be a prey
for those sharpened chasing claws,
but will get its little heart pierced
by the protective rose’s thorn.

The hiding feathers of a dying bird,
with a white rose turning red below,
its bleeding chest, like a postcard
of our so unforgettable...first love.

…that’s, if you ever had one…



 

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 Reviews of "Our Heart & The Thorn"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 18, 2007
Beautiful, very nice!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
Written from the heart with passion! Enjoyed this much my friend, what a great metaphor!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
One way or the other...we'er all gonna get it.

Walt
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 13, 2007
excellent analogy and metaphor ... passionately scribed ...
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Georg, this is such a lovely and sensitvie write thinking about that first love from so long ago. Very vivid, it broke my heart just reading it.....

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Beautifully expressed I agreed you never
Forget The break up of your first love
Very painful thoughts
Beautiful emotions George!
Excellent write!!
Love Peace and hugsss...Morning Star
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
well done, Lady J
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
i felt uncomfortable reading this, well expressed phrasing made an excellent poem, yet it carries an underlying emotional hostility
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Oh My Goodness!
Yes I see the twists of fate that may come to pass.
In protecting ourselves we still can be hurt.
Vickie
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Dear Georg,

This poem is really powerful and packed with meaning. Reminds me of that movie "The Thornbirds", starring Richard Chamberlain.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Excellent writing dear man,have a wonderful day..Hugsss
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Poignantly penned excellence, Georg, with talons and beak ready? Detect a bit of bitterness....well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Poetry at its finest - this tribute to ones first love.

Kathy
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Short yet brilliantly composed .. Georg

again leaving the reader hungry for more

of your wondrous wisdom.

Peace be with you Brother



William
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
I'll never forget that first love, and I can still feel those bloody thorns.
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
The impact of this short poem is marvelous.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Wow,stunning impact with the futility of trying to escape fate. Tragic metaphor.

Fee
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
A sharp pain,, that never completely subsides.

I so enjoy the masterpiecs you paint,,,, Christine
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Georg, Georg, I bow to your masterful pen. As LaBelle posts, exquisite. PLB&G for caring and sharing. <Mikii>
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Oh my this is truly one of your best Georg, exquisite in every way.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on October 12, 2007
Sad write, George; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
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