Writing with whispers one can say, tiptoeing among the words like a tenuous morning fog that coyly drapes the just awaken and naked sun raising itself from the horizon, a poetess that goes by you unnoticed, until her poetry perfume tell you that she was there...
Not a bird of prey, on the contraire,
this hawk is one she in the skies
telling you to dream your dreams
and never ever for it to apologize.
Also, that bird will whisper to you,
to believe in things you don’t see
because they are food of your soul,
and then, see all that you believe.
God gave her the serenity to accept
things that she couldn’t change here,
but also gave her the strong courage
to change for the good, many things.
To make my acquaintance with her
I can’t believe the blessed I was,
she came to my pages like a feather,
her name? Carol Surber aka Hawk.
Georg,
Your words are beautiful & embracing to our den sister Carol
Wonderful Poem Which Soars Through The Poetic Bounty of Your Poets Pen
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Vickie
Your words captured her beautiful kind soul beautifully!
She is a wonderful friend to all at AD
Brilliant Tribute To Carol Suber
Love the picture of the hawk!!
Sending You Peace Love and Light....Yolie
Oh Georg... this is most fitting for my precious friend Carol...Thank you for honoring her with this beautiful poem! She is such a gracious and kind soul, and I learn from her daily... Her "hawk" has been around to watch over me on a couple occasions, per her prayers...and so we certainly understand what this bird carries within its soul...
I love this so much... I know she will be so surprised...and humbled.. that is how she is... hugs, lindalaw
And fly she does, and so do your words of praise my friend, they will be like an updraft under her wings, If there ever is a poet, you sure are one. Blessings! Jasmin Horst
She is a wonderful poetess. LOve the way you honor those who deserve honor. And know that a litle tribute from a poet is worth volumes of words spoken by all presidents of the world.
Abdi-Noor
I agree she is am outstanding Poetess
This is a wonderful tribute
To the author that writes from her heart and soul
Peace be with you Brother and to Carol
Now THIS is beautiful, Georg, a lovely tribute to the strength and courage that is CarolHawks. =] Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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Reviewed on March 4, 2009
Georg..
I am so proudly amazed by this beautiful poem. You are such a masterful poet...and many of your writings have inspired me to continue my own writing. Thank you so much for the kind and magnificent poem. I treasure this and you! Thank you always, and love to you dear friend, CarolHawks
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Your words are beautiful & embracing to our den sister Carol
Wonderful Poem Which Soars Through The Poetic Bounty of Your Poets Pen
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Vickie
She is a wonderful friend to all at AD
Brilliant Tribute To Carol Suber
Love the picture of the hawk!!
Sending You Peace Love and Light....Yolie
I love this so much... I know she will be so surprised...and humbled.. that is how she is... hugs, lindalaw
Thank you for sharing!
Eileen
Be always safe,
Karen
Regis
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Carole~
Abdi-Noor
This is a wonderful tribute
To the author that writes from her heart and soul
Peace be with you Brother and to Carol
William
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I am so proudly amazed by this beautiful poem. You are such a masterful poet...and many of your writings have inspired me to continue my own writing. Thank you so much for the kind and magnificent poem. I treasure this and you! Thank you always, and love to you dear friend, CarolHawks
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D