Burning rage
Bright lightning strikes
Atmosphere charged
With electric anger
Boiling over
Lava flows of fury
With thunderous
Cursing emotions
Spilling out like
Popcorn bursting
Out in all directions
Till energy is
Spent
Left only with
(sigh)
Still unresolved issues
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Reviews of "Argument"
Reviewed by katz
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
It's a brilliant poem, encompassing inner human values.
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2002
descriptive and explosive and a cracking job to...well done...Mark...
Let this coming of age story of a boy named Bean take you back to a simple time. Set in a small southern town in the 1960's, encircled by a river and gleaming white cotton fields.
And, So Go's Life...
TRASK
Love, Janet xoxoxo
Love the popcorn analogy