east of eden (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 1, 2003

Josie, I like the way the poem carries you along. Itis full of life and beauty,with just the right touch of irony. Thanks for sharing it with us. Phyllis:)

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on March 31, 2003

thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's goods

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

I'm like that with my Daughter...So careful with whom she goes with. Love the real feel of your writing Josie. Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on March 30, 2003

like a scene from a dramatic movie...very nice..

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

This is a happy, light write. I still can smell the country air!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

East of eden would spark your creativity
for sure! Great write!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

(((josie))) i'd love to live anywhere where there are trees...and peace...and quiet...aaahhhhh, such bliss! when you start sellin' books (and you will, mark my words), save for your little retreat...i'll come visit you! beautifully written, could see it in my mind...sounds wonderful! :)((((HUGS)))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Josie,
Very tranqiul write! Loved the conversation between you and your kids, very warming!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Nicely done, Josie.
Sounds a beautiful place.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Very nice write Josie....glad the horse did not kick you..lol..mine does...cheeky little stallion....6 months old
Love
tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

good write, josie! i love all that you do! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HGUS))) :)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Wonderful story with such a great ending. This is one of the reasons I write and paint. I dream to live in the country.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

This was beautiful!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mom

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

I bet it was beautiful. Good, Josie :]

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Josie I know the feeling;-) great write...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

a lovely write
enjoyable reading

William

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

i know john you are so right the grass is always greener, but if you could see this place...

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Sounds like a beautiful place. Can I be your neighbor? I won't make any noise.

Beautiful write Josie

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

bouncey write --
of course what was that
about the greeness of the
herbaceous ground cover
in the next field?

good write

john+