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Robert F Martin

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Walk With Me
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Those of you who have read this before will likely immediately notice that I have cut the last stanza of the peice. This was a refference to God "pulling the wool" from the eyes of the speaker, and showing them "the secrets of the universe." Given the content of the poem up to that point, however, these last lines seemed to stick out like a sore thumb. It didn't really work to have a poem talking about God teaching self-reliance end with an affirmation that in the end, we needed God to open our eyes to the "secrets of the universe."

Come
walk with me
for as long as we walk together
I will protect you
until you can stand on your own
for it is man's destiny to realise
his divine nature

Fall
and I will raise you up
stumble
and I will catch you
rely on me
and I will teach you
Self-reliance

©2006 Child of Light  

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 Reviews of "Walk With Me"
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Thanks for reminding us we are never really alone.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2006
has a Universal lead of a protector in your work for me this would be the Lord. Very well expressed poem.

Reviewed on June 16, 2006
This is really, really beautiful! And it is sooo good to have you back!
B&R

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on June 15, 2006
love it

Susan

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on June 15, 2006
Welcome back! Wonderful poem.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 15, 2006
Interesting take. Your faith comes through this creation. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 15, 2006
Glorious affirmation of the Trinity, a tribute to Creator, beautifully written!Thanks for sharing!

etw


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