A life that’s built on sand and lies
Will fail in stormy weather,
And in the end most will despise
A life that’s built on sand and lies,
And though love tries, in fresh disguise,
To sew two souls together,
A life that’s built on sand and lies
Will fail in stormy weather
~
A spited heart will often rail
In soulful vindication,
To recompense, or to assail,
A spited heart will often rail,
But till revenge completely fails
And one finds liberation,
A spited heart will often rail
In soulful vindication
~
Too many friends have died this year
Passed on from here to there
All kindred souls we loved so dear
Too many friends have died this year
And though we grieve both far and near
And fete their gifts and flair
Too many friends have died this year
Passed on from here to there
~
I’ll bid thee farewell in chill winter’s air
Where time spent was lessened in pure-white expanse
When all wishes spoken could never repair
I’ll bid thee farewell in chill winter’s air,
Affording those promises, most squandered unfair,
In all shifting shadows of hope and romance,
I’ll bid thee farewell in chill winter’s air
Where time spent was lessened in pure-white expanse
richard lloyd cederberg
A Monumental Journey Novels
This poem suggests we remember our losses but let them go as winter lets go into spring. i like this one very much. Exasperating.
peace to you and yours,
carolyn
with love your chum,
Eileen
To sew two souls together,"
Love these lines, Richard, and they are oh-so-true. Triolet is my fave style of all time. I guess they feel epic to me. They say deaths come in threes. I think you've had more than your fair share of grief this year. Again, I am sorry for your most recent loss. I feel like your last poem - the winter imagery - captures the emptiness we can feel when someone passes. Winter is beautiful, but oftentimes so bleak. A wonderful set of Triolets. Love and Hugs,
Sheila
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Ron
you expressed it. -gene.
"Grief" we all must release to help ease the pain
"Finality" we all must go to.
Very Moving piece I could hear you singing (lamenting) through the mountains, " I bid thee farewell. . ."
Be always safe,
Karen
Richard, this is exceptional writing. And again, my condolences to you and to all the loved ones left to grieve.
John
Blessings to you,
ann
You have expressed abounding wisdom here, and have prompted this reader to look deeply into secrets hidden.
Blessings,
Christine