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grief and finality ...

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

For those who have passed this last year, and for all those possibilities that failed to root …
expressed in TRIOLETS of varying rhythms

Monday, November 15, 2010


Poem Artwork
A life that’s built on sand and lies
Will fail in stormy weather,
And in the end most will despise
A life that’s built on sand and lies,
And though love tries, in fresh disguise,
To sew two souls together,
A life that’s built on sand and lies
Will fail in stormy weather
~
A spited heart will often rail
In soulful vindication,
To recompense, or to assail,
A spited heart will often rail,
But till revenge completely fails
And one finds liberation,
A spited heart will often rail
In soulful vindication
~
Too many friends have died this year
Passed on from here to there
All kindred souls we loved so dear
Too many friends have died this year
And though we grieve both far and near
And fete their gifts and flair
Too many friends have died this year
Passed on from here to there
~
I’ll bid thee farewell in chill winter’s air
Where time spent was lessened in pure-white expanse
When all wishes spoken could never repair
I’ll bid thee farewell in chill winter’s air,
Affording those promises, most squandered unfair,
In all shifting shadows of hope and romance,
I’ll bid thee farewell in chill winter’s air
Where time spent was lessened in pure-white expanse

richard lloyd cederberg

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Reviewed by baz busbe
Reviewed on March 3, 2011
Loved this poem, really touched my heart. So sorry for your losses, May God bring you peace and comfort at such a difficult time. God bless. Baz

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on December 16, 2010
Takes some time to get over grief, but it does pass on eventually.
This poem suggests we remember our losses but let them go as winter lets go into spring. i like this one very much. Exasperating.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on December 3, 2010
finely etched and deeply resonant, richard.
peace to you and yours,
carolyn

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 22, 2010
Richard, of all your works that I have read, this is by far my favorite. Simple and profound, sad and true, yet comforting, honest, and eternal. Patrick

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 20, 2010
Sir Richard, this is splendid and you chose the perfect format,it needs to be published!

with love your chum,
Eileen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 19, 2010
I've been lucky this year with no loss due to death, but still I grieve for your losses and keep them in my prayers (that house and truck look like something I could actually afford...)e

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 18, 2010
"And though love tries, in fresh disguise,
To sew two souls together,"

Love these lines, Richard, and they are oh-so-true. Triolet is my fave style of all time. I guess they feel epic to me. They say deaths come in threes. I think you've had more than your fair share of grief this year. Again, I am sorry for your most recent loss. I feel like your last poem - the winter imagery - captures the emptiness we can feel when someone passes. Winter is beautiful, but oftentimes so bleak. A wonderful set of Triolets. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on November 18, 2010
Excellent writing, Richard

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on November 17, 2010
Exquisite, Richard. Wrung me wry. A masterpiece, to my mind.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 17, 2010
you've taken your sorrow and molded into a healing pronunciation of idea and emotion ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 17, 2010
You honor those who sand and lies have fallen by your gift for words. Death waits for none. By your words you comfort the living who must bear the pain of loss.

Ron

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 16, 2010
I ahare your sorrow, Richard, and admire the way
you expressed it. -gene.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on November 16, 2010
Losses such as these, indicate the rewards of these that you enjoyed in your lifetime. Family and friends that provided so much good to your heart and soul as well as to others. Excellent expression.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on November 16, 2010
Your Title says it all
"Grief" we all must release to help ease the pain
"Finality" we all must go to.
Very Moving piece I could hear you singing (lamenting) through the mountains, " I bid thee farewell. . ."

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 16, 2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOLDEN SENTENCES!!!!!!!!!!!! ' A life that's built on sand and lies will fail in stormy weather'----------- BEAUTIFUL, VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
poignant read

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
My heart breaks for you in this a year of sorrow, loss, and retrospect. Holding tight, keeping their memory alive in your heart and soul will help to carry you through. God bless...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
very nicely done-yes, too many loved ones have gone on-too much grief

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
Eloquent evaluation of loss and passing, the true sadness and indeed from the living perspective the cruelty of mortality.
Richard, this is exceptional writing. And again, my condolences to you and to all the loved ones left to grieve.

John

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
One hell of a year you've had Richard. It's hard to know the why's and the wherefore's of all these things sometimes. Hard to make sense of the universal will. All one can do is try to grieve things naturally in their due time and move on a bit more saddened; but also more blessed in having known these people and been a part of their existence here on earth. In the end, it is more or less a sombre celebration of life. I love the style of this poem and the rhyme scheme, the way it flows and such. Hope you're okay. I'm heading back east for Thanksgiving on Saturday; my mother's somewhat ill and I have a feeling I may be entering the type of year from which you just emerged.

Reviewed on November 15, 2010
Extraordinary write soul bud.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
PARTING, IN DEATH OR LIFE, SO OFTEN...IS NOT SWEET AT ALL. SOMETIMES THERE ARE REGRETS AND IN MANY CASES, IT IS INDEED FILLED WITH SORROW. YOU'VE CAPTURED DIFFERENT ASPECTS OF 'THE GRIEF AND FINALITY' OF PARTING WELL, THE BOTTOM LINE BEING...WITH GOD GIVEN STRENGTH WE DEAL WITH IT AND...WE MOVE ON. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
Sadness written so beautifully Richard.
Blessings to you,
ann

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 15, 2010
Profound. A poem with such a presence, about not wasting life, time.
You have expressed abounding wisdom here, and have prompted this reader to look deeply into secrets hidden.
Blessings,
Christine


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