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Books
· A NEW RACE OF HuMANS

· Between the Cracks

· A Monumental Journey - first edition cover

· Beyond Understanding

· The Underground River

· In Search of the First Tribe

· A Monumental Journey - 3rd Edition


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· Rejected (a curse or a blessing)

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· An Irresistible Transformation...

· Surfing on Silent Skies...

· Doorway...

· The Strange Case of Kicky Cano...

· A Matter of Perspective 2...

· A Surprising Discovery....

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· Old Friendships (not forgotten)


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· What Makes a Poet Authentic...

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· Aphorisms (a collection)

· Hey Cortana...(2019)

· Origin, or Destiny?

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· When the Heart is Flawed...

· Catching Happiness...

· The Fragments of Hatred...

· 'Malama Ka Aina'...

· On Open Wings...

· Generations....

· Dewdrops....

· A Gradual Decline…

· Like Wildflowers and Weeds…

· In Nature’s Design…

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then ... and only then

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

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Monday, February 14, 2011


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When the simpletons
Smother us in platitudes
And worn out clichés,

When nothing makes sense,
And all around insult us
With contrived logic,

When emotions die,
And sincerity loses
The roots that ground it,

When the fruits of love
Become victims of hatred
And mountains crumble,

When the parents sins
Delineate a child's pain
And all turns to dust,

Then,

Beyond what I feel,
And what I hope to achieve,
Help me interpret

That mystical place
Where bending light into bows
Has deeper meaning,

Take me to the heart
Of dream where life sings gently,
And whispers are feasts,

Where dewdrops of love
Enter the hearts of seekers
Searching for answers,

When all that I’ve done
Becomes a wide open scroll
And Spirit unveils

All the foolishness
That I’ve committed reaching
For what wasn’t mine ...

Then, and only then,
Help me understand my place
And forgive my sins


richard lloyd cederberg
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Reviewed by Marieta Maglas (Reader)
Reviewed on March 2, 2011
a very profound religious poem....thank you for sharing

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
I love the sense of work going into true betterment-i love this, especially the summing up in the end

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on February 16, 2011
Enjoyed the poem and layout.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on February 15, 2011
Wow. Back to back to back to back stanzas of brilliant introspect and humility. Patrick

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 15, 2011
Love this write, Richard. A powerful voice and message, and one I relate to easily. I particularly enjoyed lines like 'And whispers are feasts' and the entire third verse, which is an intimidating image: there in front of you...everything in a big picture; undeniable. Awesome:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 15, 2011
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2011
i don't really know what else to say except that this is gorgeous poetry and so full of honesty and humility it almost brings tears to my eyes. ok, well maybe it did bring tears to my eyes. honesty, humility.............

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on February 14, 2011
It's what's inside that counts and not the things you do in life that will be meaningful to god when you get to heaven.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 14, 2011
I hope my sins are forgiven too...if not I won't be seeing you in heaven, thats for sure...e

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 14, 2011
There are no sins in seeking. Reaching out where strong men pale is for the few. I'm with you.

Ron

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 14, 2011
A perfect 'Desiderata' for our time, Richard,
and as Gene rightly says beautifully written
from top to bottom;
"...reaching
For what wasn't mine"
strikes a particularly resonant chord,
the rights we humans give ourselves.
This is top drawer poetry.

John

Reviewed by Ann Marquette
Reviewed on February 14, 2011
Wonderful Richard, and my favorite lines:
Take me to the heart
Of dream where life sings gently,
And whispers are feasts,

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on February 14, 2011
Beautifully written, top to bottom.
Every three-line group a gem.
-gene.

Reviewed on February 14, 2011
Well done Richard.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 14, 2011
amen. beautifully expressed sincerity and humility, the ultimate surrender

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 14, 2011
This is wise and deeply meaningful to me!
I have only just recently learned this wisdom you write of..."All the foolishness That I've committed reaching For what wasn't mine..."
Less really is more, and when something is ours we truly just know it and have to navigate the oceans of separation no matter the cost. That flip side is so hard to live out also, but so necessary.
This is brilliant poetry.
Christine


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