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waiting for water...

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Ekphrastic - characterization...

Saturday, February 18, 2012


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"Bowed by the weight of centuries he leans
Upon his hoe and gazes on the ground,
The emptiness of ages in his face
And on his back the burden of the world."
John Steinbeck…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

And from his
Cracked parched lips
Wearied prayers are offered
Daily, rolled as dice blurred words
(Being little more than gravelly whispers)
Pleading earnestly - amidst a dry mosaic of
Stones and dusty furrows - for clement rains
To reanimate the skeletal fields he once
Dreamt would be his Eden…

Even so, he tilled the earth
In languishing rhythms, scraping,
Scratching, turning, folding, speaking to it,
Loving it, hating it, as his composure
Slowly waned… Often

Snared in dark seasons of thought,
He cursed his lot - in cleaving discontent - each
Day, weathered hands bearing (doggedly) the burthen of
Family misfortune, whose dreams sifted through his fingers
On quicksilver winds and settled in places where all
Such things unrequited finally find rest


richard lloyd cederberg
2012
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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on April 28, 2018
A FINE DESCRIPTION OF A TRIED, IMPLORING HEART WHICH, DESPITE THE OVERCAST OF DROUGHT, CONTINUES TO TOIL THROUGH THE BOMBARDMENT OF HIS FAITH...UNTIL AT LAST COMING TO 'REST', CONTENTED...TO 'WAIT'...FOR THE WATER THAT IS 'SURE' TO COME. SO ENJOYED. THANK YOU, RICHARD. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on July 22, 2012
A journey such as this knows no end, for it's of perpetual wonder, merely changing shapes and focus, targets and embraces. It is life, and you've captured it exquisitely.

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2012
This piece is exquisitely and lovingly rendered. I felt the longing and wistfulness throughout and the painful regret we all must face when confronted with the deeds of our lives and our decisions.

Reviewed by kimberly gray
Reviewed on May 25, 2012
Richard, new and lost around here so I am hoping you get this note that needs to find better words than thank you as you inspire me and your support is motivating! But reading this, I am leaving a huge hug for such a great piece, bravo-perfect with droplet
Thumbs up and off to read again!

Cheers, Kimberly

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on May 6, 2012
tilled and tended, richard! fertile words worth pondering...
love the pic!
be well, poet
carolyn

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 13, 2012
You eloquently bring him to life, Richard. This makes me reflect on my own dreams and wishes, which seem to stay just out of reach, but the hard work is being done. Makes me wonder when I will have this moment of realization - the fateful feeling, the regrets, the hardship all-for-not. Much enjoyed. Love and hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2012
Full of rich, dark, thick juices. A meat of a read.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 28, 2012
Poignantly meaningful is the manner in which you have put forth your theme, Richard. Well done. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on February 23, 2012
R, this is so strong, but it would take a strong person to be a farmer, or him or her self.....admire the thoughts and form of this. kudos. MM

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 21, 2012
A wonderful work inspired by Steinbeck's verse! What an ingenious and imaginative instrument this is! The poem literally grows out of the seed planted at the very beginning. The poem itself is saturated with such feeling. Truly an enjoyable read you genius head!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 21, 2012
I can almost feel how dry and sad the man and his land have become. Your descriptive verses are stunning in both form and meaning.
I have enjoyed this very much.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 19, 2012
The farmer, the mainstay of society often beaten down by fate, is dying. You have captured well his countenance and what it stands for.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 19, 2012
This amplifies the ethos of Steinbeck marvellously, Richard. Man and land are one, dust to dust for certain sure, caught forever in their enduring cycles. I also love the juxtapose of your picture and Cummings quote: it looks to me like a man crossing the rapids or it could be he's heaping mown grass; whatever, that sense of battle against/with being shaped by the natural world is strong. Excellent stuff. xx

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 18, 2012
Without reading anyone elses comments, I have to say a farmers life is a hard one, but then again are we all not just "waiting for water" in life...I thoroughly enjoyed and will wonders never cease, understood this one in my own way...thanks for writing it...Ed

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on February 18, 2012
"...Daily, rolled as dice blurred words..."

My fav line, Richard...

One can feel, here, the gamble many a planter takes in order to deal with Mother Nature, herself. There are Aces, though... she hands to those who seek to know her.
For such understanding grows and blooms with a rejuvenated hope, SO needed, to sow again...and again. . .
I pictured the quicksilver winds settling in the deep crevecis of wisdom, in the wrinkles of ole', and...under the fingernails, soil from fields of dirty-smiling farmers. . . gathering their crops of Aces!
You inspire me!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on February 18, 2012
A vivid and earthy look at the ups and downs of farmers everywhere; you express their plight with great detail and thought, providing us with a look into their minds and hearts so that we may take a moment to agonize along with them. Wonderfully said, Richard. A gem!

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2012
There is a rugged charm about this piece. It reminds me of the line from A.J.M. Smith's poem "The Lonely Land" ... "This is the beauty of strength broken by strength and still strong."... and also that other great Canadian poet Duncan Campbell Scott whose poem "The Forsaken" talks about a First Nations woman as "valiant, unshaken"... there is an indomitable spirit about this, and I like the ending... like Scott's final line from "The Forsaken" ... "then she had rest."

Be at peace with all you meet.
Roger

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on February 18, 2012
The emotions you have expressed so clearly for dreams sifted
through his fingers. Beautifully penned ~ Richard ~
Lady Mary Ann


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