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Hybridizing the flash-fiction and haibun forms …
One storm had finally passed. It seemed another was about to begin.

Wednesday, October 24, 2012


Poem Artwork
Brisk nocturnal air widened across a flushed face. The air outside was vigorous with negative ions. Breathing deeply he stretched and returned to his desk. A remote clicking sound caught his ears. Returning to the window he glimpsed a silhouette emerging from an adjacent alley. Below him the gutters ran impatiently from a fierce deluge.

No measure of words
Or collection of phrases
Could express his thoughts

A brisk go of heels played the pavement like a drummer searching for the heart of a rhythm. Jay-walking the street she paused under a streetlamp below his window. Unexpectedly a burst of wind swept over the lissome form and plunged her sheer chemise. The glow of neon, the susurrus of neighbors, the odor of lingering street petroleum, and a distant barking dog, remained equivocal as the sonsie woman shifted about in resolute manner and lit a cigarette. When she glanced up, and motioned to him, he felt his breath curtailed.

Drawn by lusting thoughts
He considered the branching
Of many options

Like dye seeping into motionless water, the vision slowly absorbed him. Transfixed; he gaped down as a wash of rain-reflected lights mirrored her yielding features. Within him a multiplicity of desires were burgeoning as lambent tongues of fire ignited upon a lifetime of moral precepts. The curves of this woman’s body were being embroidered into his senses as a soft pastel chromaticity in moistened afterglow.

Feeling flash-frozen,
Withdrawn briefly from life’s flow,
Breathing shallowly,

Seemingly immured in a place where the fantasies of Eros warred against moral prudery; he wavered in a confluence of black and white swirling madly in the grays of compromise. As his mind raced crashing thunder startled him awake. He was sitting at his desk. Near him a candle was gasping for life. The phone rang. It was his wife. She was concerned. She’d just awakened from a dream about him. Sheer curtains began billowing at the window. Outside a laden northern squall was approaching.

No measure of words
Or collection of phrases
Could quell his surprise


richard lloyd cederberg
10/2012
                    richardlloydcederberg.com



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Reviewed on November 11, 2012
very cool and surreal.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 3, 2012
Such are we as humans. Thank you for sharing, Richard. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 31, 2012
Would love to cut and paste Odin's comment as my mind has virtually echoed his every response. The observational quality, analysis, the commentary made me somehow think of Virginia Woolf... and not VW, in a curious kind of way. I think it's the honesty and open-minded approach to both cause and effect; a clear-eyed view of the shifting ground of altered consciousness, sometimes triggered by the elements. The atmosphere, literally, is electrically charged and that circuit, as it were, broken by the interception of the wife. Taut and visceral, RLC. xx

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2012
...vivid and vast as the imagined future present and the proven past... forbidden as a future long sought for and grasped in bastions of bidden bodies bode forth to outlast for an instant a longed for delight that descends from the depths to the realms of the night, on the crest of a wave dipping down, rising up, though the cup it is full, holy wine drowns out lust... even the kind sleeps sounder than rust in the soul of a man whose issue is trust in the self, in the sole arbiter of his pelf, and pure as a thought laser-focused on flesh... though the leash be brought short, our time it is brief... and the wind blows discretely, but bright through our trees... until day follows day in a burning descent and the lawns of our souls are covered in leaves... here a leave... there a leave... and leave upon leave leaves us loathe to believe that our Fall, though forbidden, will yet be forgiven... but better to never have tasted of lust than to rake up those leaves, and the moss and the must I repent, I repent, I repent of all those hot nights that never were spent in the arms of the woman to whom I belong, in the bed of her virtue, the notes of her song, and the tears that she shed for the blood that was bled on the crossroads of life where we once were wed... but my time it is short, and the lines have been learned, and the players by footlights have burned, how they've burned... to enact love's long kiss, to whisper her hush in the ear of the one to whom you long to gush... to whom you long to cling... to whom you long to sing... as light as an aria, as sweet as a ring in a swelling peal... in the steeples of time, as pure as a prayer whispering forth through the roof, through the air, on the wings of the dove we call love...

Sometimes I just need to let my response to your poetry come out in a poetic cloudburst, I guess, Richard... your poem has purpose and pith, but (if I could lapse into a lisp for a moment) it is definitely not pithy! [How's that for an understated complement].

Love and light
through your darkest night,
Roger

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 29, 2012
excellent poem ... powerful conclusion ... repetition of that verse works very effectively ...

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 28, 2012
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Near him a candle was gasping for life'--- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 26, 2012
well done

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on October 25, 2012
Richard,
An illustrious jeweled collection of phrases and the "ring"
couldn't quell his surprise. Enjoyable read.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 25, 2012
Ha! This must come from the master jazzer side of you!
It's so interesting to be immersed in a male perspective here in this stunning piece of art with an unexpected ending.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 25, 2012
I nice little mystery wrapped up in tightly worded eloquence that keeps its attraction largely because of its prurient nature––dashed in an instant like a lightning stroke. A moral lesson from God? A brilliant piece.

Strange, because before I read this I had just finished a poem I titled, “ Out the Window.” Fortunately, its subject matter is much different, so I will posted on Saturday.

Ron

Reviewed by Mor Inchrory
Reviewed on October 25, 2012
You appear to have used the haibun concept to good effect, on what is a fairly common dilemma for some of us.

“She was perfervid.” Adjective?

As a Scot, the descriptive terms “sonsie” and lithesome do not normally fit together.
As Robert Burns, aptly wrote “. Fair fa' your honest, sonsie face, Great chieftain o' the puddin-race! ...

I like the word “susurrus”, susurration. It can imply many things were neighbours are concerned.

Interesting read, I enjoyed it.

Mor.

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on October 24, 2012
You have captured the essence of lust and moral reasoning with a rich plethora of eloquent and mind probing words that draw the reader right into the middle of your dilema as you are fighting between worlds of possible compromise. A happenstance that your wife called to tell you of a bad dream? I think not, I believe Angels had surrounded you and all you needed to hear was your wife's eager voice to remind you that you belonged to her only and to the higher order that would not allow you to betray her. The pithy write you present for us to review is one of tremendous depth and soul searching; in other words another Richard Lloyd Cederberg masterpiece post! Awesome!

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 24, 2012
Both the structure and the cross cutting of the mind's reality and its insistence on using the moment, the experience, real or not, to ground thoughts of an extended level of consciousness, was both arresting and inspiring. His altered state vying to become complete. What a common state of being for most of us. Loved it.


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