There was little
stirring this morning,
save poetized perceptions
and murmuring onshore breezes-
Sensing (somehow) that
each moment was complete,
flesh & bone accepted the stillness
with no hungering expectations
as a flock of cormorants
skimmed the water
(barely visible)
above the kelp beds
where leathery fluted fronds
rose and fell with each incoming swell
.
Beyond the eastern peninsula,
an incoming vessel’s foghorn droned,
[in calculated cadence] declaring its arrival
again and again as it neared,
oddly evocative of
Gray whales migrating
south to Scammon’s Lagoon…
.
So much passed by unseen …
.
And how foolish it
was to try and deepen
any of these living rhythms,
or reinterpret them poetically,
or paste them together differently,
to satisfy some restless fidget…
.
So little mattered today,
nothing to prove, no one to impress,
nothing urgent to explain, no need to be critical,
no discontentment or notions,
no cares or questions,
no hard emotion
or unsettled thoughts,
just a few elemental words,
and the persistent understanding that
tomorrow (if given) will be another miracle to enjoy…
.
richard lloyd cederberg
2012
richardlloydcederberg.com
"so much of life passed by unseen..."
Seeing as these days with some people,
loving and caring for others can hardly be found!
Thanks for sharing, Richard!
hug
Kathy
Peaceful stillness in your splendid poem. A miracle to enjoy
for many tomorrows.
Peace in words
Lady Mary Ann
Most erudite, this is the way to live.
To put this lament in poetry the way you have is outstanding.
Stunning; thought provoking work.
Regis
Connie
budd
Peace
Roger
blessings,
Vesna :)
I think you have captured the magic of those moments with superb eloquence.
One could follow you every breath-taking step of the way, from the susurration of the sea breeze through to the resonant drone of the approaching vessel’s foghorn.
Coupled to the cormorants display and the evocative sight of November’s departing whales.
You have presented a natural feast of the Far North’s pictorial scenery...
One small point and possibly a strange one from someone who at one time invariably employed it, is whether capitalising every line benefits the poem or not, at the moment I am undecided.
Nevertheless, a very enjoyable read indeed.
Mor.
Christine