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· A NEW RACE OF HuMANS

· Between the Cracks

· A Monumental Journey - first edition cover

· Beyond Understanding

· The Underground River

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· A Monumental Journey - 3rd Edition


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· An Irresistible Transformation...

· Surfing on Silent Skies...

· Doorway...

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· A Matter of Perspective 2...

· A Surprising Discovery....

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· Old Friendships (not forgotten)


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· Paul Harvey’s ‘If I Were The Devil’ transcript- 1965

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· Hey Cortana...(2019)

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· When the Heart is Flawed...

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· The Fragments of Hatred...

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· On Open Wings...

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· A Gradual Decline…

· Like Wildflowers and Weeds…

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Without imitating self...

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

For writers there is a perpetual flow of ideas; a few are original, most are not. There is a good argument that originality loses its spark if one’s efforts are contrived, or done to gratify personal needs, are overly-influenced by another’s work, or become too intellectualized. Following are some darting thoughts about the process and what, I’m convinced, embodies creativities most valuable aspect of being able to think and act independently:
Poetic-prose…

Monday, February 2, 2015


Poem Artwork
Those who strive for originality:

those
who purpose
to remain vibrant,
or vigorously focused
without succumbing to some
caricature-of-self; resolving
more as a guileless
voice,
reflective
incendiary
(intellectually),
germane, perhaps,
without looping or lapsing
into mannerism or affectations;
a personal challenge to remain original
without contention, or imitating self, or passing off
an old model-of-self; some contrived effort
to be seen with favor, (or)
to relive the
warmth and joy of
past seasons and victories
by re-hashing what once worked

attitude
pulling ideals
out from the ruts,
figuring the perfect-fitness
of what is shared while
defying branching
compromise
(in which)
one's
penned inventions
reflect only the sniveling drivel
of a writers beleaguered life…

…..luminous light
encircling
achievement in a false nimbus
invariably forces the greatest achievers
to their knees (temporarily) to reveal (to them)
(and to all those watching) that no human
is the full-bottle on anything…..

It’s wearying
(at times) finding
health in an art-form
where opinions are like weeds;
where arrogance becomes a shield
(to keep hidden all pecking-insecurities);
where the ceaseless cacophony of ‘me-noise’
refuses to understand why another’s hopeful face,
glowing from within, decays day-after-day,
or why a philosophic (wo)man is
obliged to mull a
lake's health
in winters savagery, or
why faith causes the steadfast to
pause – momentarily - admitting they are
fully content to die in fields of common grass…

Knowing
every epoch
has its makers,
as every masterpiece
has (hidden in its guts) some
awful struggle; or perhaps some loss,
or life-altering circumstance, which
addresses the human-condition
with heedful strength, as
creative-insomnia
bears an ongoing challenge
to palliate human-suffering and – if somehow
blessed to do so – (if only briefly) becomes
more archetypal than all originality
pawned-off
with only
the faded colors
of worn-out dollar bills…

richard lloyd cederberg


“When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man’s concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.” John Fitzgerald Kennedy

                      Between the Cracks



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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 2, 2017
THE GIFT-GIVER, OUR CREATOR NEVER MAKES A MISTAKE IN HIS CHOOSING. THANK GOD, AS HIS POETS, WHO WE ARE AND WHAT WE DO...IS MORE IN GOD'S HANDS THAN OURS. THE RANGE OF POETRY'S ABILITY TO TOUCH AND CHANGE LIVES IN MANY WAYS IS TOO NUMEROUS TO COUNT. BUT WE DON'T HAVE TO STRESS BECAUSE ONCE WE REALIZE WHO'S IN CONTROL AND CAN ACCEPT THE FACT THAT WE ARE MERELY 'HIS INSTRUMENTS' WE CAN, SORT OF SPEAK,...'LAY OUR BURDENS DOWN'...AND JUST PATIENTLY WAIT TO BE USED(FILLED, INSPIRED, OVERSHADOWED, ENLIGHTENED) BY THE MASTER IN HIS PERFECT WAY AND WILL...WITHOUT IMITATING SELF. THANKS FOR SHARING, RICHARD. LOVE, BLESSINGS AD FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 31, 2016

holds reader interest, thought provoking work


Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on May 19, 2015
Another well penned truism so few might appreciate before they too have had the tenure of experience realized by its author and imbued for the readers to savor. Each stanza is a gem. Thanks, for this one, Richard.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 6, 2015
I find that your verses express a lot of truth about the creative process (writing being one). People refer to me as a "writer" and "poet" but I have never claimed to be either. My poetry is very simple and I use it to express my thoughts and feelings and share them with others. I appreciate the philosophical perspective that you have shared here, Richard. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 5, 2015
I don't get how I mssed this one...but I am glad I waited til today to read it as it really states to a differing degree how I feel with regards writing...it states again what I feel but more intellectually than I can put it...this is one I want to save, as will wonders never cease, I actually understand it for the most part, Richard...thanks for writing this and I wish thee and your other half to keep writing an dto find a Peace/Piece...-e- (have not heard from you of late, hope you are staying well...)

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on February 4, 2015
I agree, few have originality that is true to oneself.
Most steal it from others. There is a certain lesbian writer at the Den here that - how can I put this - if she isn't stealing she spins off from the original. This is why I write very few reviews now. I mean how many times can you give adjectives that actually help the poet/writer. I've have thought about many a time saying, That was good for a Jackson Browne lyric. I especially hate stealing of titles. Once again, Richard, your poetry is truly one of a kind.That
was an excellent quote from JFK.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on February 4, 2015
~Richard~
The richness and diversity of originality surpasses.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 4, 2015
This is a very thoughtful exposition. I feel the pain, to use an old cliché. I waited until age 70 before venturing into the world of poetry. It has been a struggle for many of the reasons you have cited (with eloquence). I never strive for an original thought, only a new way of looking at an old theme. But that's me. Rarely do I spend more than 20-30 minutes on one if only to avoid becoming stilted and to stay within my own attention span.

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on February 4, 2015
We read. We think. We try. We publish. Sometimes, we connect. This is a good summation of the many moods of writing. Write on, Richard!

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on February 4, 2015
I never quite thought of poetic limits. Creativity is what makes poetry so great. However, I do fear that we are raising a much less creative generation that is living in an X-boxed, cellular, and much more protective synthetic world. When I visit some public school classes I sense too much conformity. Radical ideas are less accepted and all are trying to practice passing a government sponsored test. Now that's stifling creativity because it leaves little or no time for a teacher to orchestrate the importance of creative individual expression. Senior teachers who loved their positions are simply opting to quit. New teachers come in and fit in to the conformity norm. It's a change from the past alright but not a good one. Amen

Reviewed by Carol Ann Phelan
Reviewed on February 3, 2015
Smiling I most certainly am! Everyone is unique; one of a kind. To learn from the masters is an honor. However when one holds a pen and looks at a blank piece of paper with the eyes of the soul, a whole universe of thought, experiences, lifetimes, emotions and wonder do spill out quite naturally with eloquence and style.

With respect and admiration,

Carol Phelan Aebby

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 3, 2015
This was quite a tour de force of the writers' folly. I particularly like the following:

"penned inventions
reflect only the sniveling drivel
of a writers beleaguered life… "

We all want creative and original thinking, but we are all standing on the shoulders of giants who created the language we are using and the phrases that come so naturally to us that we think that we thought of them.

In order to be original, a writer must not be required to write a certain way or follow a pattern or theme that another writer made great. The most important thing is to communicate. When we don't communicate to any audience, no one understands us.

Ron

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on February 3, 2015
Quite an expansive diatribe! I love the way you encompass the improbable with the hope for the almost-impossible. Strive to maintain originality... but never fail be inspired by the greatness that lies hidden among the furthest corners of the idiom; while, at the same time, not becoming too arrogant nor self-centric nor self-aggrandizing.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on February 3, 2015
An excellent work in the purpose of exposing the truth of some writers' tendencies and directions.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on February 2, 2015
Wow, much to relate in this, I think it shows the creative and poetic spirit's turmoil to the utmost. When I saw your name in my inbox, I cam back here after ages to read your work, and of course, am so glad I did.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 2, 2015
This is a blueprint for art, with deep wisdom and insights!
Yes, it is particularly difficult not to contrive anything, not to worry about opinions as art unfolds, green and alive!
Blessings,
Chris

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 2, 2015
an extremely lucid proem exploring the truism of creativity .. your poetic commentary is right on the mark with it own uniquely patterned target of original pursuit ...


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