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Books
· A NEW RACE OF HuMANS

· Between the Cracks

· A Monumental Journey - first edition cover

· Beyond Understanding

· The Underground River

· In Search of the First Tribe

· A Monumental Journey - 3rd Edition


Short Stories
· Rejected (a curse or a blessing)

· The Visions of Saoirse Gilbride....

· An Irresistible Transformation...

· Surfing on Silent Skies...

· Doorway...

· The Strange Case of Kicky Cano...

· A Matter of Perspective 2...

· A Surprising Discovery....

· 10 North Waverly Place...

· Old Friendships (not forgotten)


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· The Art of Poetic Prose...

· What Makes a Poet Authentic...

· Paul Harvey’s ‘If I Were The Devil’ transcript- 1965

· Direct Characterization

· Aphorisms (a collection)

· Hey Cortana...(2019)

· Origin, or Destiny?

· Stream of Consciousness


Poetry
· When the Heart is Flawed...

· Catching Happiness...

· The Fragments of Hatred...

· 'Malama Ka Aina'...

· On Open Wings...

· Generations....

· Dewdrops....

· A Gradual Decline…

· Like Wildflowers and Weeds…

· In Nature’s Design…

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broken man...

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

In memory...

Wednesday, October 12, 2016


Poem Artwork
Broken man
With head in hand
Accepts his fate
As reprobate
Accepts the sneers
Of passerby’s
Who see a life
In shambles
.
Broken man
With thoughts askew
Endures unschooled
A sorry fool
His tapestry
Of barren threads
Reveals a face
Drawn haggard
.
Broken man
Once was adored
His father’s heart
A mighty sword
His mother’s love
Gave him the strength
To forge ahead
Of heartbreak
.
Broken man
Oh broken man
What happened to
The dreams you had
What happened to
The hope once shared
When you were young
And eager
.
Broken man
He smeared the slate
And waves the flag
Of common-fate
Plays saddened notes
That ring untrue
A fallen man
Left yearning
.
Broken man
Oh broken man
There’s nothing left
For you to plan
A dream gone wrong
An unsung song
Is how your life’s
Remembered
.
richard lloyd cederberg
2016
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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 15, 2016
WE HAVE ALL BEEN BROKEN AT SOME TIME OR THE OTHER, IN SOME WAY OR THE OTHER. I CAN ONLY SAY, 'BROKEN'? YES. BUT BEYOND REPAIR? NO. FOR IF ONE STILL HAS LIFE, THEN ONE STILL HAS HOPE AND HOPE MAKETH NOT ASHAMED. WELL DONE, THANKS FOR SHARING, RICHARD. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 14, 2016
"unsung song" says it all for a broken man who still has life to live. Well phrased and imaged. Liked it a lot.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 13, 2016
'Broken man
Oh broken man
What happened to
the hope once shared
when you were young'.......

'broken man
oh broken man
there's nothing left
for you to plan
a dream gone wrong
an unsung song'..... VERY BEAUTIFUL and VERY SAD!!!!! I LOVE THIS BEAUTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 13, 2016
A very poignant look at what can happen to any of us, especially if we set our sights too high.

As I read I had thoughts of Simon and Garfunkel's, The Boxer, run through my head.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 13, 2016
I have walked a thousand steps in his shoes
I've seen it all come crumbling down
and now fall back on the promise of...
redemption.

Reviewed on October 13, 2016
'who is this broken man. . .' -- the Jesus Christ Superstar by A.L. Webber. As the Biblical saying goes, “The last shall be first and the first last.” The spirit that is ready to be last comes to be the first. Goodly rhythmic reading. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on October 13, 2016
A sad story that was well constructed. Nothing broken here.
Michael D.

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on October 13, 2016
Perhaps we can all see ourselves in this one, evaluating our lives so clearly. No matter what our station or achievements, will we see anything more than you've given us in this slow step galloping goo, perhaps reclaimed as something akin to our own special La Brea ending. Well done.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 12, 2016
A bit of a sad tale, well handled and well written. John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 12, 2016
There you go again, Richard, putting my sh** on the street...I sincerely wish I could have written this about myself but now that I read of it I feel less broken, thanks...-e-


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