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Books
· A NEW RACE OF HuMANS

· Between the Cracks

· A Monumental Journey - first edition cover

· Beyond Understanding

· The Underground River

· In Search of the First Tribe

· A Monumental Journey - 3rd Edition


Short Stories
· Rejected (a curse or a blessing)

· The Visions of Saoirse Gilbride....

· An Irresistible Transformation...

· Surfing on Silent Skies...

· Doorway...

· The Strange Case of Kicky Cano...

· A Matter of Perspective 2...

· A Surprising Discovery....

· 10 North Waverly Place...

· Old Friendships (not forgotten)


Articles
· Thanks Giving...

· Kennedy and Lincoln...

· The Art of Poetic Prose...

· What Makes a Poet Authentic...

· Paul Harvey’s ‘If I Were The Devil’ transcript- 1965

· Direct Characterization

· Aphorisms (a collection)

· Hey Cortana...(2019)

· Origin, or Destiny?

· Stream of Consciousness


Poetry
· When the Heart is Flawed...

· Catching Happiness...

· The Fragments of Hatred...

· 'Malama Ka Aina'...

· On Open Wings...

· Generations....

· Dewdrops....

· A Gradual Decline…

· Like Wildflowers and Weeds…

· In Nature’s Design…

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A child with marveling eyes…

by Richard Lloyd Cederberg — Read all 280 poems by Richard Lloyd Cederberg

“Poetry is boned with ideas, nerved and blooded with emotions, and all held together by the delicate, tough skin, of words.” Paul Engle.

Wednesday, September 19, 2018


Poem Artwork
I’ve known
Certain poets
Who share their
Inventions merely as
‘Bare-thorn’ moments,
Expressed in a certain way
That connects with the
Protected places of
Another’s heart…
A kind of
Artless originality,
Breathing meaning
With graciousness and
Straightforward acumen…
.
(Perhaps) such poets grok
Creative inspiration similarly to
How a child with marveling eyes
Perceives the wonders of creation
.
Normally these types
Seek to avoid the hokum
Of politicos, pettifoggers, and
The humdrum of emotionalists plowing
Perfunctory furrows, represented in
Endless nondescript ramblings…
.
Notwithstanding
All discontentment,
These fair-poetic-miners
Resist the kaffeeklatsch mindset,
And brush past the chesty know-it-alls
Whose seedless stratagems deplete the
Heart and soul of honest originality
.
Thankfully
There are some
Dedicated wordsmiths
Who press on faithfully, who
Quietly act to unearth
Hidden gems; to
Remove them carefully;
To prepare them honestly; to
Clean and position them precisely
Where they will urge reflection, insight,
Awareness, and regard from those seeking
Something more than prosaic expression…
.
richard lloyd cederberg
2018

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Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on September 28, 2018
An insightful poem on writing poetry. We create in different ways. I am one of the poets who seek to write what's in her mind but doesn't yet know all the fancy techniques of a poet. I am still learning.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 20, 2018
I think you can count yourself among those dedicated poets who have all the accoutrements required in the last stanza.

I don't qualify because I dash off my poems quickly without regard to any careful positioning or concern for urging anything except, perhaps a thought expressed.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on September 20, 2018
Some can, some cant, and some get e for effort, and i'm sure I've been all three. And I learned a new word, Grok. I thought it was a typo until I looked it up. Thanks for sharing this unique piece.

Reviewed on September 19, 2018
Every poem, whether it's a hit or a miss, is depending solely upon its readers' perception. If your readers like what the poem conveys it's a hit. If no one likes its rambling, it's a miss! I have no interest in reading some self-proclaimed shrink in this authorsden. Their ramblings bug me and there is NOTHING POETIC about that type of "who think they know it all" rambling, and their expression is NON-EXISTENT!

Gotta get it out of my chest for that idiot who has no life of his own!

Sandie

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 19, 2018
I LOVE 'YOU' RICHARD, THAT IS, YOUR PEN. 'YOU' ARE TRULY UNIQUE. YOU'RE ONE OF THE POETS ON AD THAT I AM OFTEN IN AWE OF. YOU SEND ME TO THE DICTIONARY(SMILE) AND I AM HONORED TO BE A MEMBER OF THE SAME ON-LINE WRITER'S COMMUNITY OF WHICH YOU AND SO MANY OTHER FINE POETS ARE ALSO A MEMBER. ONE DAY WHEN I GROW UP(SMILE)I HOPE TO BE LIKE YOU, RICHARD, BUT UNTIL THEN, I AM CONTENT TO BE 'ME' AND TO KNOW THAT HERE AND THERE ALONG THE WAY YOU DO ENJOY SOME OF MY INSPIRED SHARINGS.

HAVING SAID THAT, I NEED TO ALSO SAY THAT...EVERY SEEMINGLY MINUTE, UNIMPORTANT 'STITCH' THAT GOES INTO THE ON-GOING CREATION OF THE MARVELOUS GIGANTIC QUILT, WHICH INCORPORATES THE FINE, RARE AND UNIQUE COLORS OF EACH AND EVERY POET THAT LIVES OR HAVE EVER LIVED ...IS OF GREAT VALUE AND SIGNIFICANCE. GRANTED, SOME ARE, OF COURSE, MORE NOTABLE AND WELL-READ THAN OTHERS AND THAT IS ALL GOOD AND WELL. HOWEVER, ONE SHOULD NEVER FORGET THAT 'EVERY WORD AND SYLLABLE' OF A POET, NO MATTER WHO OR WHERE THEY ARE, OR THEIR POSITION ON THE POETICAL LADDER(TOP OR BOTTOM), IS A 'PART' OF THEM, INDEED, IS A 'PIECE' OF THEM. THUS, EVEN IF WHAT THEY SAY OR HOW THEY SAY IT, IS NOT TO ANOTHER POET'S LIKING OR NOT PENNED AS WELL AS ANOTHER WOULD HAVE PENNED IT, THE EFFORT OF SHARING THEIR VERY 'BREATH' SHOULD BE RESPECTED AND APPRECIATED SIMPLY BECAUSE OF WHAT IT IS; A PIECE OF ANOTHER HUMAN BEING'S SOUL...ANOTHER HUMAN BEING'S LIFE.

THANK YOU FOR SHARING ANOTHER WONDERFUL POEM, ENJOYED. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 19, 2018
You have laid out here in this poem an interesting approach and perception about the adventure that is poetic writing. To me, it's all about the reader, how can I create something that the reader not only wants but needs to hear. I think you alluded to this at the end of your poem. Very interesting. Intrigued.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 19, 2018
Yep, I'm with Odin, in that your last stanza is by far the best of the bunch. Love how your instructive thoughts give the reader (me) a blue print on how to go about searching and unearthing those treasured gems.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on September 19, 2018
And... as you posit in your final stanza, you are indeed one of those who "...urge reflection, insight, awareness...". Would that more were of the mind you shine your wordsmithing-light on in this honest and sincere perception of what we poets should all aspire to. Bravo!


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