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Haibun

Monday, October 15, 2018


Poem Artwork
The beach is abandoned. She descends the wooden stairs waving. We walk silently through shifting sand-grass. Her perfumed hair is intoxicating. Soon we are at the water’s edge. In the distance two blue feluccas sail in tandem. Waves foam white on the sand. Pulling up her gauzy dress she dips her toes gingerly in the water. Above us seagulls palaver in cool morning air.
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Along the shoreline
Two dreamers begin to sense
The other’s desire
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We are drawn to the wild-raspberry bramble near the cliff base. I squeeze one. Juice squirts between my fingers. Her expression deepens. She points out at the surf-line where seagulls are pecking at something. Two hearts speak mysteries. Onshore breezes pick up. The gauzy summer dress slips easily from her shoulders. Wordlessly I watch.
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In the cliff shadows
A combustion of hunger
Consumes two lovers
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richard lloyd cederberg
2018
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HAIBUN is a prosimetric literary form that originated in Japan. The term was first used by the 17th century Japanese Poet Matsuo Basho.
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Haibun essentials:
Haibun relates a journey or experience
Is a combination of Prose and Haiku
The writing is sparse, tight,
With strong imagery,
It imparts a revelation.
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“If a haiku is an insight into a moment of experience, a haibun is the story or narrative of how one came to have that experience.” Bruce Ross.

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Reviewed on October 17, 2018
So lovely, the ambiance is perfect, the passion pure and real. A joy to read.

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on October 16, 2018
I love this picture. You provided the perfect words to accompany it. I had used this picture in one of my banners for my book.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 16, 2018
With this poem you have done great justice to a Haibun. It was as though I was there, soaking up the experience with you. And, the poem certainly fit the image very well. With all except the raspberries, you evoked my experience in your experience. The sun. The sea. The surf. The wind. The gulls. The girl. Nothing better.

Ron

Reviewed on October 15, 2018
Well done I liked the explanation too.

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on October 15, 2018
You seem to be successful in many forms, I loved the way you brought this love story to fruition, I am impartial to raspberries, they are so good for your heart. amongst other things, Lovely romantic sharing. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 15, 2018
If I didn't know that you had written this, I most probably would not have not even read it, never mind commented on it. But it was your composition, and so I read it and this moment I am commenting on it. I enjoyed what I read. Actually I enjoyed it very much. So! An old codger has found a new form. One I know I shall be experimenting on sometime in the future. So! I thank you for opening my eyes to yet another form of poetry.

Reviewed on October 15, 2018
Beautiful form of mixed Haiku prose and poem. You can actually write a story with this form. Good job, Richard!

Sandie

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 15, 2018
Intense, beautifully rendered. Not familiar with the form. Now I am. Thank you, Richard. Perhaps I'll look into this and try it sometime.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on October 15, 2018
Beautiful share. Thank you.


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