EVALUATION
It’s not progressed the way I thought
This journey once compelling
Despite the strength with which I fought
It’s not progressed the way I thought
And though some projects led to naught
And certain wins were telling
It’s not progressed the way I thought
This journey once compelling
.
CEDING
There comes a time we must concede
When what we’ve done transgresses
No matter how we fight or plead
There comes a time we must concede
In spite of what a spirit freed
In life and love expresses,
There comes a time we must concede
When what we’ve done transgresses
.
LAMENT
I haven’t felt the sun awhile
Its warmth and clear direction
I’ve rambled far too many miles
I haven’t felt the sun awhile
And tho’ abiding many trials
In truth with no exception
I haven’t felt the sun awhile
Its warmth and clear direction
.
REMEMBERING
It’s not the way it felt at first
When I was young and willing
The endless needs and constant thirst
It’s not the way it felt at first
And though my life’s been unrehearsed
At times not worth a shilling
It’s not the way it felt at first
When I was young and willing
.
SYNOPSIS
Despite all grief, these lessons learned
Were worth the price I paid
It’s offered me what’s truly earned
Despite all grief, these lessons learned
And though the world would jilt or spurn
Through battles strength I prayed
Despite all grief, these lessons learned
Were worth the price I paid…
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© richard lloyd cederberg
8/2021
Between the Cracks - A Monumental Journey Series
And your uplifting conclusion that
“Despite all grief, these lessons learned
Were worth the price I paid”
Life rarely presents the way we expect when young…
But a Life well lived with unexpected happenings
that we can accept…is a gift that gladdens the Heart…
I LOVE your photo…absolutely stunning!
Diana…🐚
Rx
an invitation for a legal citation or the beginning
of a feast. Like your poem, it's all a matter of perspective.
So well crafted.
We all have gone through the ups and downs in life, but the way you have put them into a well-constructed poetic form is truly amazing!
Thank you, Richard!
Sandie
Ron
Were worth the price I pain."
Far too many live with the entitlement mentality, obviating the very nature of learning and progressing, i.e., one can't appreciate light without experiencing the dark.
Well crafted verses that render the reader with understanding of what's needed on the part of all of humnity. Well done, Richard.