Ooo, Ron, that eye up there is a very effective part of this piece.
I love your rhyme and rhythm, cascading, cuplet by cuplet... infectious, really. There's a starkness about the honesty in this "wake-up"... a bit of an important poem, I'd say. Good stuff! katy xox
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
"...Ripped from the pages yet unwritten,
And cast upon the unknown smitten..."
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I love your rhyme and rhythm, cascading, cuplet by cuplet... infectious, really. There's a starkness about the honesty in this "wake-up"... a bit of an important poem, I'd say. Good stuff! katy xox
And cast upon the unknown smitten..."
Good lines...
Elizabeth
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