Ooo, Ron, that eye up there is a very effective part of this piece.
I love your rhyme and rhythm, cascading, cuplet by cuplet... infectious, really. There's a starkness about the honesty in this "wake-up"... a bit of an important poem, I'd say. Good stuff! katy xox
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
"...Ripped from the pages yet unwritten,
And cast upon the unknown smitten..."
This book chronicles an infinite allegoric odyssey of Absolute Awakening in which a learned man, a mute man, and a recluse woman are the principal players. The mute and the recluse are the learned one's Teachers and Guides on his journey of Enlighten
Histories of the world are generally written to either celebrate technology and science, or to herald doom. My book examines the path of the spirit in the onward rush.
This combined narrative dialogue and play is about the uncreated, unborn and undying transcendent Self of God-consciousness and Buddha-nature. It describes an odyssey of transcendent Consciousness Awakening and Remembrance.
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Peace,
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I love your rhyme and rhythm, cascading, cuplet by cuplet... infectious, really. There's a starkness about the honesty in this "wake-up"... a bit of an important poem, I'd say. Good stuff! katy xox
And cast upon the unknown smitten..."
Good lines...
Elizabeth
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