Ah, Ron, while some are thoroughly absorbed in where the open verse can lead, I snuggle in and gulp down the ongoing rhyming as in your piece. The subject matter has never been approached in quiet this way, in my readings, making it unique in, yet, another way.
There is a kind of beauty in reading the inner self of another... I was quite glued. katy xox
an emotionally sensual and stimulating poem ... the best things always seem out of our grasp ...
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2005
Poet, very often, we as humans tend to search out beyond our mere mortal confines in the hopes of finding our “soul-mate,” when in fact, all one has to do is look right in front of them. I have enjoyed reading your thought provoking and delightful poem. It did stir up many emotions, which is always a good thing whenever it happens. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talent. Take good care and be well.
This was nice, Ron! How did I ever miss this one this morning. So you're going to find a star, a soulmate afar? Great thoughts and vert sweet.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2005
this was so sweet Ronald. I haven't had the chance to read you in awhile. Oh how I miss your honesty, sweet sweet honesty. I have much cathing up to do. well written, well read
I always like a poem that takes me for a ride in space and wraps me with splashes of sensuality and dumps me on an unknown galaxie looking for what is so near and yet so far. You have reached the high heavens with this splendid write.
"And so I seek a different star,
a soul mate, not near, but oh... so far.
So we can commit the ultimate sin,
a child of a tribe far from the one I'm in"
Am I far enough......lol!!
This is a damn well written piece anyways...but could NOT help having humorous thoughts reading this!!
Almost like the BIG BAD WOLF in "My room full of mirrors and the big bad wolf" poem!!
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There is a kind of beauty in reading the inner self of another... I was quite glued. katy xox
Love,
Eileen
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
a soul mate, not near, but oh... so far.
So we can commit the ultimate sin,
a child of a tribe far from the one I'm in"
Am I far enough......lol!!
This is a damn well written piece anyways...but could NOT help having humorous thoughts reading this!!
Almost like the BIG BAD WOLF in "My room full of mirrors and the big bad wolf" poem!!
Love Tinka :p