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Losing You
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
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The other side of love, and no, I'm not losing anyone.


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I'm losing you,
you know it's true ,
a little at a time.

There was a time,
when both our minds,
harmonized in rhyme.

We thought as one,
and we had fun,
in rain and bright sunshine.

And then we slipped,
you, in your way,
and me, in mine.

A little at a time.
You, in your way,
and me, in mine.

You didn't call,
to tell me all,
like you always did.

You didn't kiss me,
that sweet goodnight,
was it something hid?

The smile has slipped,
from your face,
I'm losing you,
and can't replace.

What we had.
I’m losing you,
and it won’t be long.
‘til you’re gone.

Copyright 2011 © Ronald W. Hull

6/3/11

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 Reviews of "Losing You"
Reviewed by baz busbe
Reviewed on July 22, 2011
Fantastic poem, sad but often true. God bless. baz

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
you know Ron, I think this is a perfect analysis of what really transpires when a relationship ends - it is not all at once -- as you eloquently say, "a little at a time" -- in the end it is almost never a surprise to either person -- the final clue is usually, "you didn't kiss me, that sweet goodnight" -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 8, 2011
Sadly, this is a universal and timeless theme in this life/world. Very nicely presented, Ron; soul-stirring. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on June 8, 2011
this touches so...so nice

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 7, 2011
A slice of life played out all too often I suppose. But the experiment does require a variety of ingredients and sometimes they get stale. Patrick

Reviewed on June 6, 2011
So sad and touches the heart Ron. Glad you aren't losing anyone.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 6, 2011
Love is like a fire - to keep it alive you need to stoke and nuture it. I hear ya ronfriend ... richard

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 6, 2011
And too often couples grow apart....especially if they're very young when they get together....Nicely done, Ronald!

Anna

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 6, 2011
The expression in this piece is perfect as a depiction of such loss when love goes sour and separate.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 5, 2011
TOUCHING AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on June 5, 2011
Warning signs
not to ignore
~Ron~
would have us to know
sadness to escape

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 5, 2011
There are other ways of losing someone, other than, actually losing them...I think...e

Reviewed on June 5, 2011
Ron,

Such a beautiful and sad write. Lost love is always hard.

Mary

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 5, 2011
Beautifully written!
Full of sadness and the eloquently heart-felt confrontation of pain.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 5, 2011
Awww...happy it's just poetry...but a sad one yes...know the feeling!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2011
Sure glad it isn't you darlin....I can relate to these words..... wonderful writing as always my sweet sweet ron...Hugss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxoxooxox

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 5, 2011
Yes, glad you aren't losing someone, but the words here are so good i love your poetry. Wish i'd spend more time here on the den, but just don't so much anymore.


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