The One (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 11, 2012

Wow! You are amazing... I was reading your bio and all I can say is wow! But also, I really love this poem "still waters of your soul" that is classic worthy! "Mortal coil" Write on brotha, WRITE ON...

Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)

Reviewed on July 1, 2012

Ron, this is such a wonderful gift of yourself, your love and devotion to that special one..So hard to find these days...Your words are well placed in a beautiful frame of devotion..

Sandy

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 16, 2012

A poem as lovely as the girl in the picture.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on June 8, 2012

I can't but echo what all have said below - very well done.
She's special - the ONE.

db

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 8, 2012

Thank you for sharing this lovely "love song" which expresses much and awakens thoughts and emotions. I am happy to "say" that I can relate, Ron. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on June 8, 2012

a lovely tribute just not too sure about the last 4 lines. hmmm
'anointing and ending her toil'....puts dark visions of compassionately or not, putting someone out of their misery. hmmm

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on June 7, 2012

What a beautiful testimony of love! The One...
And we know "The One" when we find them, you write love prose with much beauty and feeling behind it. I do have to laugh about the chicken though :)

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd

Reviewed on June 5, 2012

Lovely thoughts in your poem, Ron.
Regarding my poem, The Blue Vase, I wonder if it's because so many women work today and just don't have time for the paraphernalia of yesterday? Which is a pity.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

I AM HAPPY FOR YOU, RONALD AND I AM DOUBLY HAPPY FOR HER. MUCH BLESSINGS, LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

Let nothing come between a man and his chicken! ;-)Patrick

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

I like the ending here, the last six lines. They carry it all past the 'here' to the 'beyond here'; and I read it that the 'voice' of the poem goes first to the Great Beyond, and receives the dedicatee (you) of this poem, which is the ultimate comfort, isn't it? ~~ Diana

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

a wonderful testimonial to your enduring love ...

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

It's a lucky man who can honestly say these verses. Welcome to the club, my friend. Dick

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on June 4, 2012

So much love in your words.....sigh....beautifully penned, Ronald!

Anna

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on June 3, 2012

"One" so fortunate *Ron* to be
the subject of these great vows!!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on June 3, 2012

Sounds like you are a very lucky man. Well written and obviously with much love.

Stay well and keep writing
Eddy

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on June 3, 2012

Ron,
some of the most eloquent vows
i've ever had the pleasure of reading;

simply beautiful

john

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on June 2, 2012

This is beautifully written with so much tenderness!! You are kind.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 2, 2012

This is well stated dude, but I have to say that the guy who wrote this is one "HEN"pecked fellow and I can only advise that you get therapy ASAP...LOL, e

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on June 2, 2012

Words spoken so tenderly as this is beautifully written Laura

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on June 2, 2012

This is utterly breathtaking, Ron, and you sure know how to express your innermost feelings to the girl you love!

Wow.

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on June 2, 2012

Ron, you succeed in describing real love, love beyond the "I do" and "'till death do we part" love - you've reached into the applicable core values of, love - the "for you are in my heart, and you are in my soul" Rod Steward declaration of love - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 2, 2012

A truth oath of love wrapped in loyalty.
fee

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 2, 2012

The sincerity and beauty in this avowal is breathtaking, Ron. Makes standard marriage vows seem impoverished by comparison.

To soothe me when I'm sick,
to nurture me in health.

Be one with me in poverty,
and carry me to wealth.

... this is a love that supercedes "for richer, for poorer" indeed. Fabulous stuff and wonderful to share in. Bless you both! :)) xx

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reviewed on June 2, 2012

With relationship history filling books today, it's rewarding to read of one that is obviously of a transcendence only the parties involved need to understand.