I have a lot of miles on me and I can tell you that we are own harshest critics. This is very good a cappella rendition; Your pitch is right on the money. You picked a key that works perfectly for your baritone voice...and you are neither a whisky baritone, nor a rain barrel baritone!

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

A lovely poem song! Have you been able to write a melody to go with it?....M

Music is always good for the soul. M.True

A fine song expressing your happiness; it is good to sing. I hope I can find my song again soon. Sure, I sing in the choir, but it is the song in my heart/soul I'd like back. Love and peace,

Regis

Wow! Very nice Ron. Am so happy for you!
Mary

Very nice hahaha! Love it!

A beautiful bird with a song, this poem is just wonderful, Ron.

We all have different talents, and making use of them is good. I love this song. Take care, love and peace.

For all of us, there is that need, that pursuit of such a song. For some who know not struggle and confinement, such is a delusion of their mind, forever making them feel better about themselves, but never really having affect on the heart and mind as yours obviously does. I read some of your reviews and wonder: do some of these people ever think about the cliche words they use, the trite sentiment them love to throw at any and all thoughts that seem to further their cause, yet mean little more than the fleeting impression they hold for an instant, then rush on to the next piece they can drown in sentimentality. Thank doG, you are a man who works at delving beneath the traps for essence. Keep it up and beware of reviewers like S.A. Such non-thinking, but gushing sentiment has always been suspect among those of us who truly know there is no heart worth singing about with the mind.

Ron very nice! I like the picture of bird - is so happy and expressive. I am not gifted with singing voice (that is what I believe today). Thinking about it, I can make a living singing - by charging people for not singing for them :)

couldn't get it to play on my PC, I'm sure it is lovely - poetry in music

This is so special and so beautiful. I watched the video of you singing and it is wonderful!

Kathy

BRAVO! Sooo neat, this was and of course we'll be looking for an encore now

Sing On! My wife says that I also sing too much, but my dogs really seem to enjoy it!

Hats off Ron. You keep outdoing yourself always. Only one phrase that made me think for a moment was "your morning"

Oh! What a wonderful morning, Ron.
Morning about being...gentle...with life...others
...yourself.
A poem-song with a gentle rhyme...loving words that
touch with gentle rhythm-whisper and look...gently
falling on a PC screen and a listening ear of your
reader...on Sun-morn...

Oh! What a feeling!...to find out so much about the
gentlest act of caring and it's great power to turn
a life around...making the world less difficult for
most of us...

Great to see/hear you...singing your poem-song.
Ex aequo et bono...score your poem and singing-act
...11 out of 10...Score that...now you share with my
all favorite...Audrey Hepburn's...Moon River "singing"
as seen...during her healing process...at the "Breakfast
at Tiffany's" film.

Yes, your smile's missing...seems the hardest thing
to do...at so many stages of life...but no pressure!
And, yes...don't we all envy that...talent...courage
and...choosing to be gentle...the true virtue of who
you really are...and true understanding of life...no
matter what...
Extra Kudos!...with a smile...much love and positive
energy...posted your way...
Thank you for sharing/entertaining/making my day.

I like to sing too,
but only solo I fear.
I can't carry a tune,
So I sing so low nobody can hear.

Michael D.

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! Blimey, that took some pluck. Brill lil rendition in an unusual accent.
Kewl lyrics and tune. Leaves one kinda chipper.

Clap!!..Clap!!...Clap!!!! Great song!!!! It flows very smoothly as well!!! Thank you so much for sharing this!!!!

Sandie

Captivating song. I really enjoyed this.

Love ya!

Jane

excellent Rod you did well no need to revise it
peace be with you

William

Beautiful, Let's all get singing, "One more time, one more time" Well done,Ron!

Thankfully I have no sound, as I don't know where to plug in my speakers, so I don't get to hear your voice but thank you for the kind feelings of love & I know you love me more than you do Richard below...I am alot cuter than he is anyway...-e-

Now that took some moxie. And with no accompaniment too. I have love for you now Ron. You blessed me. You surely did. Don't listen to Matlack. He's jealous.

Superb, Ron.


Once more, I would like to suggest kompoz.com
as a songwriting site.

Your success rate there might only be one out of 20,
at first.

But it WOULD work for you....

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