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The Shroud of Poverty
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i guess i was struck by the fact that she could be any of us if circumstances turned bad

The Shroud of Poverty

 

The lines of too many dire decisions,

Show in the composition of her face.

Her body language spells desperation,

In effect, she shrinks from the world.

 

She carries the weight of the world on her shoulders,

I can hear its mass in the heaviness of her sigh.

She carries the love she can’t remember,

Deep in the recesses of who she used to be.

 

To go without has left her constantly wanting,

Feeling deprived makes her want even more.

Her feet shuffle along as she cradles her child on one hip,

The shroud of poverty swallows them up into nothingness.


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Reviewed on May 29, 2008
You have aptly painted in words the face of so many desperate women in the urban jungles of Asia. This piece is a subtle reminder to share whatever small blessings that come our way, which is what you have done with this posting. Thank you Karen and be well.

Sincerely,

Regino

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 15, 2008
Such sadness in this, which you have written so well.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 15, 2008
You are so right on with this one, the lines as I have often stated in past, between the have nots and the haves is very thin, and yet we still look, critizize and condem. Maybe if we all reached out our hearts and hands a new generation may come to be someday that conquors poverty and hate.

Fee

Reviewed on May 15, 2008
wow,super and I've seen it played out so many times in this city and other places I've been,

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on May 15, 2008
You are right...we could be in the very same situation of another...the poverty of life is all around us and yet at times we cannot even realize or understand our blessings...

another realistic poem Karen...

nice work...

Art...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 15, 2008
This picture is displayed much too often,,, sad indeed.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 15, 2008
This is such a sad picture of those who are needy. (I'm afraid if gas prices don't change we're going to see a lot more of it.)

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
The sadness is felt so deeply through this beautiful write. Poverty is a heartbreaking story to tell but you told it in words of a great poet. Thank you. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
...poetic sadness...given the beauty of wisdom and heart...to something worn...not easily taken away...when there is nothing left to give.
excellent write Karen...
John


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