Spot ON, Elizabeth!! Spot ON!! You have captured the experience
perfectly. The sound and fury, the power, the eery curtain of darkness. . .excuse me, I've got to go get under the bed now.
Feel a storm comin'~!! xOx 'Pea' xOx
This piece can be read simply, Liz, or be felt more deeply for its use of metaphor ... either way, it is a wonderful, descriptive write. Well done! Hugs, Elizabeth
There's a lot of punch in this menace you describe, Liz--one of those rare poems that says a lot in only a few words--reminds me of the brevity of my own poem, Sister Silence, although this one is a descriptive enjoyment, too....Jerry
What storm?? LOL It's been raining here in Burleson, Texas, for two days; we need it, but still--I'm more than ready for some sunshine! Well done, Elizabeth; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
perfectly. The sound and fury, the power, the eery curtain of darkness. . .excuse me, I've got to go get under the bed now.
Feel a storm comin'~!! xOx 'Pea' xOx
Cryssa
Edwin
Sheila
Strongly expressed dark and foreboding metaphor current and apt (unfortunately) for these times. Well said!
John
Fee
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
A very picturesque and meaningful write. "Chaos escapes order Another assualt beginning, another blunder into the macabre.
Fabulous.
Mary
Regis