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KID Brown Hair
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Kate’s metaphoric, murderous rampage,
Has left Authorsden a killing field,
But now, she’s opened a new page,
Time for Poet Killer to be killed!

But first order, a description in detail,
Of powers and traits of the devious Kate,
Blonde, represents all things female,
With power wrested from former mate.

She is sovereign female wisdom, truth,
And is The Most High Goddess, of course,
Fertility, life, beauty and youth,
Female mysteries, a primordial force:

Cycles of Time as present, future and past,
Cycles of Nature as life, death and rebirth.
Potential energy, earth connection, cast
As a constant union of heaven and earth.

And now I must tell a tale most weird,
Relate dastardly deed, error in Kate’s plan.
She sat on Leland’s knee, stroked his beard,
Sucked core knowledge from the man.

She had no clue of the imminent threat,
Energy of raging thoughts in his head,
She kissed him deeply, when their lips met,
On vast powers, unknowingly fed,

And received, with symbol of manhood,
Current thoughts of her destiny intact,
Kate now reflects myth, not to her good:
Her hair turns brown and ugly, in fact,

And soon, Kate’s fair and holy image,
As symbol of female wisdom and power,
Will fall and her captured soul engage,
A hideously snaky monster will flower.

She retreats to hideaway in silence,
As nature’s forces, by man, are conquered,
Ultimate act — domination, vengeance —
By Leland, hero would not be deterred.

But he works and plans not solely alone,
Aid from Athena, symbol of man’s holdings —
Fema
le helpmate, supportive, a clingstone,
His vine, subordinated, submissive enfoldings.
 
Fem-traitor Athena guides him on the task,
Magic winged sandals, gives him for speed,
Strong pouch and an invisibility mask,
Heroic-male courage, skill for the deed.

For if upon Kate’s face now, man should gaze,
To rigid stone he will instantly change.
So our hero prepared his task for days,
As very far his search would range.

To Libya’s Lake Tritonis he flies,
Where he travels through thick forest,
Passing statues of Kate’s beastly allies,
He finds where she’s reclined for rest.

Hero creeps where the Gorgon sleeps,
Past stone pillars — dead lovers, her honor.
At Kate with Athena’s mirror peeps,
Swings his crescent sword blade upon her,

With never a direct look at her face,
Severs her head with mighty blow,
Inserts the head, strings tightly lace,
And flies home with his pouch in tow.

So Kate, symbol of woman’s power,
Head enshrouded so no man will see,
Becomes dependent, supportive flower,
Ever dominated devotee.



Some will read this and say, “In your dreams!” Others will recognize the ancient Greek mythological drama of the war between the sexes, the metaphor of Medusa and Perseus. I have poetized a modified version of the story and changed the original names to expose the guilty. LOL

 

 

© 2004 R. Leland Waldrip

 

 


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 Reviews of "KID Brown Hair"
Reviewed on February 29, 2004
Great write Leland! Enjoyed this.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
expertly crafted mythological reprisal!

Reviewed on February 28, 2004
I laughed all the way through this L. fantastic humerous poetic revenge. G

Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Ha ha...I very much enjoyed this, outstanding Leland!

Reindeer

Reviewed on February 28, 2004
that'll do her in...kill her with kindness; she will HAVE to be forced to give up her evil ways! LOL

great write, leland; enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. ;D

Reviewed on February 28, 2004
(((leland)))

kill her with kindness, eh? great job on this one--enjoyed

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Enjoyed this, Leland. Toodles, Kate!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Classy way to go. I see a recurring theme here today, Leland. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Leland,
You killed her with
such style...
Even better than my
masking tape & wolves...lol


Bravo!!!!


Trixie :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Outstanding write Leland!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
No wonder my neck was sore this morning! Really shouldn't shared any chopping ideas :-) Ah the battle of the sex's! You have done me great justice with this......ask any guy that has done battle with me :-) It's where my humor comes out the most. Thank you for a delightful mystical tale of an ending.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Outstanding, always learn something from every one of your poems! You killed her with style.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
YES fantastic epic here Leland...great writing....
and I see you and I both did away with her head LOL...
Poor Kate...I loved this..."Leland, hero "

Hahaha well done ...floria

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Leland , This is fantastic....
You did her in CLASS!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Leland a fantastic write and great capture of the Mythological war of the sexes. Outstanding write!Bye Bye Kate in classic fashion;-)!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
Leland...Kate's head has been severed and and flown to places unreachable this day..
This is undoubtedly the perfect kill for our killer! Wonderful write! Lisa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
I would tend to opt for the 'dream category!' But a very well penned poetic end to our Serial Killer Kate.


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