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PINK YOU!
by Kimmy Van Kooten → (All Poetry by Kimmy Van Kooten)
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Pinking on a couple of my sense’s here
Circling aside, from any two eyes or ears . . .

"Who knows what? ...of this pair of lips or
Two nares? . . .of my primmed grin, even?"

"O’ a smile seems stridden if the nose has a fall!
Smirked, if encircled . . . all slunk, if in wrought!"

"And, who gave me this cold anyway?
Chap has a name? . . . No?"

Inserted me off from all odors and taste!
Spun on my axis . . . no visions, apace!
Yea, bidden,  round n’ round like a rolly-polly!
Curled up in this little ball . . . all lain!

". . . Germ-ridden!",
He quoth!

All drest in my chaffed-riven coat . . . Who? . . . me?

And the wiles made me sneeze in his face!
"God
Bless, YOU!" , I said . . . with lips barely parting . . .
Red-chinned from drooling, . . . never did smell his farting!
And the last thing I mouthed was the rim of his glass . . .

Better to overlap and cut in from behind
Than snivel all alone with alas!

Pink You!

 

 

 

copyright 2009
Kimmy Van Kooten


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 Reviews of "PINK YOU!"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 13, 2009
THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS VERY WELL DONE IN THIS HUMOROUS SCENE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Your pens are so unique and creative, great work!
I always enjoy them.

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
Well written !

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 10, 2009
...and they call my sense of humor "off the walls"? Girl, I have known a few that could make a graveyard stone laugh, you would have them in stitches!
Well done, but don't dare sneezing on me or I will fart!

Georg


Reviewed on September 9, 2009
Kimmy,

There is a bit of sass in these lines of Pink - well done, one of your best!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
Kimmy,
Perfectly you! Broken rhythms, respect for language and confident enough to play wondrous games with it..and yes crazy in perspective but brilliant in understanding and saying exactly what you want to say. Love it!

John

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
Crazy and all Kimmy.

Ron

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
interesting picture, and actually the write made me smile. I could picture this. LadyJ

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
Kimmy, this was so cute, love your humor....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on September 9, 2009
Marvelous Kimmy and it has "you" written all over it.
Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
Oh Kimmy, I love your humor and I think you got the last laugh,er ah sneeze or something...well done

fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
Thank god the farting remained innocuous.
Your sense of humor remains intact in this witty piece.
You do have a mind like no other, and you know that it's
a gift don't you?
Blessings and peace ...

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
A light and "sneezy" write. Cute and humorous.


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