AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  MaryAngela Nangini PhD, iBryon Smith, iEva Pasco, iLisa Loucks Christenson, iEdie Batstone, iMORGAN ST. JAMES, iJeff Mason, iDavid Schwinghammer, iRichard Cederberg, iSusan Smith, i

  Home > Drama > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Lynn Barry

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Success story
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 425 Titles
· 2,419 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Aug, 2001

Lynn Barry, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Fine line
by Lynn Barry → (All Poetry by Lynn Barry)
   Not rated by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

which side are you on...

Oh what a fine line we walk
Are we criminals, are we naught?
At any time we can cross over there
That is why we must beware
On this side or maybe that
Not so clear not so pat
Some hop skip and jump around
Never really touching ground
Oh what a fine line we walk
Better think before we talk

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Fine line"
Reviewed by Jim Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
must be the other side

Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Dr Seuss?

Reviewed on September 27, 2006
There is much temptation to cross the line, the most tempting being...complacency. Good write!!

Micke

Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
There's a reason for why there's a "middle." This was well said and very interesting take. My best, Gloria

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
So much wisdom in this impacted poem thank you

Joselyn

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
A fine take on "the dark side" everyone has, whether buried deep or close to the surface. I enjoyed your poem.

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
enjoyed your work---exceptional job---->jaydan james

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
There is a fine line between everything we do, or don't do.

Good advice and a mighty fine poem.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2006
I've never been a real mean dad, but I told my son this evening he had two choices. I could be a real mean dad, or a real nice dad, so take your pick son. He picked the real nice dad, of course he's never seen the real mean dad.
Everything has a thin line..
Great write cuzz
Lurve ya!


New Poetry by Lynn Barry
Popular Poetry (Drama)
  1.  For Susan Bachman – Missing from Penns
  2.  When Swizzle Sticks Collide
  3.  Silly Ass
  4.  My Haiku of Death
  5.  Deep Down Within - revised
  6.  The Sinners - Chapter 1
  7.  The Sinners - Chapter 2
  8.  I Walk
  9.  The 2007 Best of 'Cheese' Awards
  10.  Lucifer's Rose
  11.  Take off that dress Mrs Haversham
  12.  Hath pity Gaoler let me be
  13.  Come Sit By The Fire
  14.  Esmeralda (for that moment)
  15.  Below
  16.  Little Lost Soul
  17.  tight
  18.  Cecilia Gets What She Wants
  19.  The Unfinished
  20.  Agree To Disagree
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Stabbing Pencey Boudreaux by Mary Lynn Plaisance

A poignant story about letting go of a narcissist in your life. Have you ever been attacked FULL force by a narcissist? It's the closest thing to being stabbed over and over in the back.  
Member BookAds

The Throne of Olympus Volume 2 Balance of Power by Peter Jessop

The Throne of Olympus trilogy is a modern-day re-working of the Greek mythological tales of Zeus and his battle against the Titans.  
Member BookAds

Ode to Janis Joplin by Judy Joy Jones

Spoken Word This CD will touch the deepest inner part of your humanness and spirit, you will never be the same after listening to the depths of struggle, the reality of life, the touching voice of truth. It will shock you, move you to tears. It w  
Member BookAds