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I Followed the Light
by Louisa A Dobbins → (All Poetry by Louisa A Dobbins)
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As I lay on the pre-op bed
awaiting my turn for the
surgical procedure room,
I began telling stories,
sharing some smiles and
spoken word Art.

To my room they pushed
As I was talking all the
time.  Opps...I have
another audience, a doctor
and two nurses I had never
seen before.  At this time
I must have been testifying.
I saw tears on the nurses face.

I saw on a screen my intestines.
I said good I'm going to have
much more fun...watching to see
what I look like turned inside out.
A nurse said. "you won't see it".
Strange,  I thought, and then
I remembered, while I was signing
a computer pad, someone had
given me meds in a hyperdermic
injection.

I woke up in post op.  How long
I was there, I don't know.  My
new friends applauded as I was
dressed and prepared to go.  I
shared love with them all, and I
look forward to seeing them again.

I believe the last I was reciting was
'Mother to Son', by Langston Hughes.
My ending is:  Serve your God, Serve
your country. Go on boy shine your light.
Make mama proud of you. 

I thought about the ending of,
my poem, 'Get Well Soon', which
ends with Follow the Light...Live the
light, THE LIGHT IS IN YOU!

Louisa A Dobbins
(c) 2009

 


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 Reviews of "I Followed the Light"
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on November 20, 2009
Louisa, glad your home. I sure sense the light in you!You are such an inspiration to us at authorsden. Thank you.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
I sure am happy to hear that you are at home resting. An ordeal to go through with nerves on edge, but you got through it and that is the main thing. I am sure God was with you as he is now, heal my friend...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Eugene Williams
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Get well soon nice poem

Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Louisa,

Waking up in a hospital is always a scary thing. Leaving is euphoric!


Mary

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
THE LIGHT IS IN YOU! Yes Louisa the light is Jesus, I rejoice with you that all went well, and that God your Father is your Healer and Deliverer! Well done Louisa!


Much Love,
Always!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Glad to hear all went well, Louisa.

Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Glad all went well; you continue to be in my prayers. I remember when I had my colonoscopy: they gave me a light anesthesia; don't remember a thing except I was dreaming I was eating vanilla ice cream! LOL Well done, Louisa!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
We can't go wrong following The Light. Well written story, Louisa. God bless.


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