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Put Two Marbles
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Put two Marbles
 






  in a jar
and shake it.
There's no give in those marbles,
bouncing noisily off the side
and each other's hard exterior.
First, forming tiny cracks,
then pieces.
No more a marble
but distorted, unrecognizable,
unable to play the game.

more conditioned
for the jar
is the tennis ball.
Bigger, but soft,
pliable, but firm,
resilient, equally giving
in to the other.

My wife and I are older,
a little less fuzzy
and the bounce isn't as high
but, we're still playing the game
stepping over the glass.

 

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 Reviews of "Put Two Marbles"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
An excellent write Rusty
A profond piece camouflaged
in simplicity

Peace be with you
William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Keep that bounce bouncy...only way to get "there"...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Keep on bouncing bong bomg bong, up n down until you get a pain in your groin..

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Wit and wisdom in this write...Don't stop bouncing ;)

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Keep it going Rusty. It is your life and it should be happy despite its ups and downs. Victor

Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Truly beautiful and inspiring, Rusty; very nice! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Oh, Rusty...............this is beautiful, with a p o w e r f u l message behind the words. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
This one almost makes me cry, Rusty-friend. It's so intuitive and wise, excellent advice for the newly married or even the newly engaged. If they can't be like the tennis balls, maybe it's best to call the whole thing off. Excellent poem, wonderful lesson there. Would you write another one about a jar with a loving tennis ball ... and the unyielding marble ...
Much love and respect for your unbridled talent. So proud to know you, my friend.
CJ

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Rusty, you're incurable rascal, and better be saving for that costly divorce. Put my name in another jar with one of them there tennis balls. I'll have a ball... right then - and them! - Bill

Reviewed by Debra Kraft
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Excellent!

From one pliable tennis ball to another, may we always hold firm, roll with the punches, and never crack! ;-)

Debra


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