Every night, I have dreams of you...
Thoughts of sin, flow thru my veins...
Slay me!
In the air tonight...!
Capture my thirst...!
" Take from me, your lust bite!"
Your eyes and lips...
They are "branded" in my soul...
Breast...
I am the child starving with pleasures...!
Nipples...
Welcome my lips...
A taste wished to be "teased...!"
Skin...
Flavor of thY BLOOD THAT BURNS FROM PASSION DESIRES!!!!
Touching...
Licking...
Biting...
And kissing...
Awakening the hidden soul...
Of a Vampire!
Your hips...thighs...and portal of oneness...
A sign " flashing" WARNING!
THE FORBIDDEN LANDS!!!
Most who go there...
Never return...!
Fallen into the grips of " Silk Sand..."
...Lips...
That are moist...
With scent that would tempt any MAN!
ANY WARRIOR!
ANY SOLDIER!!!!!
I try, to walk away...
But the fire within me...
AICKSSSSSSSssss....!!!!!
Like a child SCREAMING out of CONTROL...
You whisper to me...
L'amour de moi...
...I am Eve...
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Reviews of "I am Eve..."
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2003
Wow is right..Hot buddy Hot...Super write..
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2003
deliciously seductive love...you have come over to the dark side I see :-)
Are you and Anne Rice aquainted? You do vampirism a delicious encore to your other writes. Wonderful Gilles. Glad you are on our side.
--love & peace,
Susan
*whew* what did YOU eat before writing this? wow, this is hot. :) especially love "your hips...thighs...and portal of oneness.../a sign "flashing" WARNING!/THE FORBIDDEN LANDS!!!/most who go there.../never return...!" excellent imagery, giles! i love vampire tales...this one is told, masterfully and sensually. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
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--love & peace,
Susan
Great write...
Trixie {DEER}
Huggs
Lady G
You creative you....only a fish can...do what you do...you let your write come alive..
Love
Tinka