Attracted by one anothers dance each admired their different stance one a wannabe ballerina the other a tap-dancing stud when a belly-dancer got involved everything hit the mud
The notes he sang sounded off key his rhythm didn't match her melody the new she, was more like he, but couldn't follow his leadership role forming a trio, could they be a whole?
dancing on the same platform each one strongly using different steps they whirled in and out up and down trying to meet each others need but somehow never did succeed
They were among a group of dancers who watched with fascination as the three performed askance trying to outdo each others gyrations
The choreography took a downward trend no longer could they fill their wanderlust they never got their styles to blend so ended dancing in deaths dust
A great idea for a poem and great analogy for how it is in life and living,it is not easy to dance to another's beat,(silly in fact)we skrew it all up if we do not follow our own style of dance and rhythm.
A beaut poem.I have two left feet so no one can follow me.(ha)
Love from
kay.
OH...yes...a threesome is a DRAMA! Involved in an explosive one myself at one time with two other women, was THE inspiration for my tarot card, THE THREE DOORS! That threesome of women also appear in my novel, BLUE CORN WOMAN for which inspired the 28 cards I illustrated, all posted in my den. I also have a trio in my upcoming cowgirl novel. Drama indeed! Good write, Eileen!
They were asking a lot of each other in this disorganised trio !
Has a metaphorical feel about it Eileen, and brings to mind the old adage...two's company, three's a crowd !
Peter
A poignant story about letting go of a narcissist in your life. Have you ever been attacked FULL force by a narcissist? It's the closest thing to being stabbed over and over in the back.
A beaut poem.I have two left feet so no one can follow me.(ha)
Love from
kay.
Ron
Many sides to this one!!
Love Tinka
Peace,
Carolyn
Take care,
Sherry
Bobbi
Sage
I liked this a lot Eileen!
Has a metaphorical feel about it Eileen, and brings to mind the old adage...two's company, three's a crowd !
Peter
love and peace
Carole
Love
George
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D