Joy! Love the recital. Do you do local readings, Eileen? You should start a poetry cafe. "...merge as one in eternal fusion". This is powerful, yet so softly written. As is love and divine union...
Lin
Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on March 30, 2006
With verses like this SPRING comes to life.
I love to work out in the fresh air with my
flowers. Your "gardeners" depth in this verse
can easily be seen through the lines. I love
this beautiful poem.
Beautiful recital and verse, Eileen! You have this Fertile Fantasy down to a science, the pistil, stamen, and ovaries, reproductive interior parts of the flowers. The recital has a hint of an echo that so compliments your voice and the background music Rise by Herb Alpert enhances the recital. Sounds like you could be in a garden with statuaries and waterfalls.
Sigh... lovely, Eileen, I gave up on copy/paste since I'd have to reproduce half the poem back to you here.
"our seed is mined"
I chose this because it's just soooo you, creative, visual, and I can embrace the thoughts it gives. But they all do. This is really one, continuous sentence, uninterrupted by puctuation... a perfect decision for the theme, I think. Is "flow" over-used? So what... this floooooooows. (smile) katy xox.
I concur with the board below completely, Eileen !
You are the Queen of sensuous romance in the Den !
Lovely picture compliments the exquisite poem
Peter
Nothing like a Fertile Fantasy to keep a smile on our face, Eileen. This is beautiful and sweet, lusty and loving...what more do any of us need?
Take care,
Sherry
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Lin
I love to work out in the fresh air with my
flowers. Your "gardeners" depth in this verse
can easily be seen through the lines. I love
this beautiful poem.
Sage
"our seed is mined"
I chose this because it's just soooo you, creative, visual, and I can embrace the thoughts it gives. But they all do. This is really one, continuous sentence, uninterrupted by puctuation... a perfect decision for the theme, I think. Is "flow" over-used? So what... this floooooooows. (smile) katy xox.
Birgit and Roger
Great write.
love and peace, Carole
You are the Queen of sensuous romance in the Den !
Lovely picture compliments the exquisite poem
Peter
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Well done!!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry
Susan