Feeling the Forces (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

Faith...the substance of things hoped for..........the evidence ...of things not seen.

You have quite adroitly brought about a fulfillment of that Scripture, Lady E! You are a constant astonishment, and pleasure to read!

Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

rebuilding the past is difficult ... with faith, there is always to the potential in succeeding your quest ... hope you achieve harmony's return ... hopefully, the desires you aspire to feel are warm and soothing ...

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on July 29, 2006

So many times over the past two years I have asked myself that same question and always I find that harmony is but a breath away for me if I am but willing to take it... Your poem, well written will impeccable flow, was a joy to read!

Myrna

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

After the day is done and gone...when we look at how we spent our time and what we did to make life better...then we see the affect we gave 24 hours. We are a mere one in this world of millions who think about their days too. When we all believe in the smaller things in life that make up harmony...then notice what we past up in those twenty four hours to find a faster way to travel, a shorter cut to greed...then we are blind to details of living that make us secure and more harmonious as people existing in harmony.
We need to get the basics back and to simply BELIEVE like your pen so graciously defines.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

Sometimes when I am reading your work I feel like I am sitting on a pendulum...wondering where it will take me with the next swing... ...'join the mistral winds that arise'...and this exotic wind transports us where?...with this poem, to a place where there's hope. The Mistral (and the Sirroco)...now you've really touched my heart. Panda :)x

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

well done.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

A strong faith is a blessing that can overcome all obstacles.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

Powerful positive write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

Sometimes peace and harmony must be found in the midst of the storm. It is there that faith is tested the most severely.

It is good that we have a solid rock to anchor our fragile lives too! That lounge has magical properties I imagine.

The heat is finally breaking a little - Hallelujah!

In friendship . . .
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

Faith can move mountains, as they say, and poets to meaningful verse, as well.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

it is remarkable to me how you take us from bliss to upset in just one line! but that is how life itself is...in one moment all is different. Naturally, I appreciate the happy ending! Faith is powerful...thank you

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

I love the uplifting tone at the end of your poem, Eileen; your faith arises from the mists of darkness. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

Eileen,

Captivating emotion and triumph of light over darkness. Very positive, uplifting ending...I was worried for a minute, but knowing your strong faith, I know you'll overcome any adversity. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

When I sensed a battle turning. . . .
You pick up your trumpet blowing . . . .
In came the cavalry overflowing.
Such encouragement. . . .
Heaven sent.
DWB

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

A wonderful poem, setting the mood and turning it, very compelling.
Love, B&R

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

The mechanics of this whispery poem is fantastic, you use few words to convey your talent and premise, but you use them well.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

No! the source of right restores my light

Yes, Yes, Yes!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

Eileen

Having God as your compass and rudder in life, you will never go wrong..

It is very important to have faith in yourself, underpinned by an indomitable trust and belief in Infinite Intelligence..

Shalom

Peter

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 28, 2006

Was hopin' you'd pop a poem in before my time was up; glad you did! As always, Eileen, a good, thought provoker you have penned! Thank you!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D