Spider Play (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Adding: promiscuous, pulsing pulchritude, dear Eileen! I'm laughing...promise!

Micke
(what ARE you finding in those moving boxes??)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 23, 2006

Watch that paralyze part! ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

You have this Halloween thing conquered! Loved it and the picture!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

an echanting poetic venom that is indeed a treat ... cool halloween poem ...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

good one

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Quite the alliterative treat for us... and no tricks involved..)
Well done..

Myrna

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

.........................................still running!!

s...........i........s Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Shiver me timbers, girl, this is one chiller diller of a write! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Killer Kate has competition: GAD this one is scary. And spiders just undo me. Thanks...spiders and storms, my nightmare factory is going to be working overtime!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well done, but BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Eileen

The repetitive aliteration has a deadly effect of its own right,... woe betide the prey that gets caught up in this this tangled web..;-)

Excellent work from your astute pen..

Hugs

Peter

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Beware of the passionate spider!!!!! Wonderful write, Eileen!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 21, 2006

Excellent personification and humor, Eileen! This is just what I needed this morning! Thank you, sweet friend, I love it!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

A whimsical look at a passionate spider once caught in her web..

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Welcome to the web of arachniphobia...careful...wipe all of your feet and allow E to make you comfortable...fun poem, Sis.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

So that's what stung me last night. No wonder I can barely speak this morn, let alone laugh...hehehehehe (hystrerical laughter) Great poem ET. Victor

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

:)))) Happy Halloweening to you, Eileen. You have me grinning here. :)

Gina

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Sultry spider spinning sinfully seductive metaphor, Eileen....with a splendidly spooky sting!
Love my friend,
Taylor

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

My goodness, this is a treat--I have missed you at the Den..So glad your back!!!

Love & Peace, Dove

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 20, 2006

Eileen ...

Halloween or not ... you use a brilliant metaphor dear one quite effectively! You speak of the insidious aspects of sin with chilling probability. Your alliteration of imagery is spooky, to say the least.

Yur chum also ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg