Did You Feel Me (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 22, 2008

Beautiful photos you have to go with your writes. Amazingly serene as your poetry is too. Completeness I look for and hope to find soon. Being myself is nice and I look forward to my heavenly home way beyond the moon too. Nice lovely write. I feel your heart was in this one.

Reviewed by Richard Hiebner

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Did you feel me?
A good question.
I shall ponder this thought for awhile

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Moonstruck. . . .
One can feel the gravity
Pulling. . . . .
Taking the reader 'To Feel'
The passion you keep in store.
What could a lover ask for more?
DWB

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Absolutely beautiful Eileen, your words glide as smoothly as a velvet moonbeam...
love and peace,
Carole ~

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Heavenly and intoxicating, romantically beautiful
your words flow like your moonbeams
Thank you Eileen

Love * Peace
William

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

You clutter your brain too much
You can't recognize my touch

A perfect stanza to describe how we all tend to worry constantly and can never see the forest for the trees. Great write!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Linger in the arms of gladness
Make of love a time well spent

Extremely lovely, Tiger Lily, as is the music.

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

lovely absolutely lovely...what I especially like here is the layers of meaning...this could as easily be a poem about the spirit as a poem about the flesh...it is a lovely and well crafted piece of both spirituality and sensuality.

Reviewed by Susan Bailey

Reviewed on April 16, 2007

Beautiful poem. Enjoyed it very much.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Beautifully done, magical moonlight sheds her spell.....Enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

sensuously stimulating beauty ...

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Eileen,

Did I feel you? Did I feel you?? Yes, I did, and it was good. :)

Beautiful, sensual lines make the reader glad to have been touched by your words. :) Well done! You've outbested yourself.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Ahhhhhhhhhh. Love the moon, love this moonlit love fest. So hot it
is cool, so cool, it is hot !! YUM. 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Gorgeous poetry, Eileen; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Yea, yea, yea have finally made my way up the ranks to Queenie Eileen the Cosmic Queen!!!! (((((((((HUGS))))))))) Oh I have missed your absolutely beautiful cosmic poetry! This is of course a beauty and softly erotic too! I am so glad to be back (YES FOR GOOD) and be able to read your works again!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

One would have to have been a corpse not to feel that...the poem I mean:-) A sumptous blend of sensuality and soulful depth.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

"Did You Feel Me"
Eileen I loved this.
Sensuously powerful radiating with soft and gentle vibes of love.
Beautiful!

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Best description of a wet dream I've seen. Sneaking on in like a moonbeam.

Ron

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Loud and clear! This is filled with such grace...

"Make of love a time well spent..." I love this line!

It seems so easy but for many they just don't quite "get it"...nor feel it!
Great job! Eileen~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

This is wonderful!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Inspiring poem Eileen. I think we all of us
are pieces of light, some brighter than others,
but we share in the this experience we call
life. ;)

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Excellent pen of a higher purpose. Enjoyed. lady J

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Splendid offering Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Guess that's why they call it a lovers moon.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

This was my favorite verse:

You clutter your brain too much
You can't recognize my touch
Let down all your defenses
So I can explode your senses

Great write!

Thanks
Dan

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Yup I was sweating all night, how did you do that little explosion thingy..

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

A sublimation of sensuality in full ignition of libidinal dynamo etching the colors of emotions on the doors of Venus' Palace as an arrow to CUPID's way... "Did You Feel Me" will glow throughout the millennnia.

I salute You, Poet.

In gratitude and admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

At once to me ...

A delightfully arcane view of the Holy Spirit trying to work in ones life, and humanities oftentimes stumbling bumbling ineptness that impedes His work. Sugar chum, your mind is a wonder. Blessings to you ...

Light and Wisdom and Love from the Sugarwegian

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

If you bathed the northeast you did it with rain last night...e & r

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on April 15, 2007

Very sensual...almost Zen..ish. Loved it. Great one!