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Cold, Cold Heart
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This started out as a poem but Country Generations, a 10 piece group from N.S. saw it and thought they would like to turn it into a country song for their CD


      Cold, Cold Heart ( Country Song)


I can see it in your face, 
I can feel it in the air.
I can hear the sounds of silence, 
I know it's everywhere.
So darling look me in the face, 
and tell me we that we're through.
Tell me honestly, be truthful,
I  know that's hard for you.


 We vowed to be together, 
Through all the good and bad.
We promised to be truthful,
 Even if it made us sad.
Today our lives have changed, 
You've torn us both apart. 
You cheated and you lied from, 
Deep inside your cold, cold heart.


Don't let me see the coldness, 
The chill that's in the air.
 Don't hide yourself in silence, 
Cause to us that isn't fair.
We vowed to be together,
We joined as man and wife.
We promised to always love,
Each other through our life.

 Today our lives have changed,
You've torn us both apart.
You cheated and you lied from,
Deep inside your cold, cold heart.
I thought our love would strengthen,
From the very start.
But you cheated and you lied from,
Deep inside your cold, cold heart.  
 

            Words by Rose M Rideout

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Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
I can almost hear this set to music. How many beautiful relationships are torn apart by lies and by one or the other partner cheating? I believe in commitment and to honour oaths made in the sanctity of marriage. Sadly very few take their oaths seriously or marriage for that matter. I for one won't marry again until I'm sure that it's the real thing and it's a forever thing. Been burnt one time too many.
Thanks for sharing this.
Chanti

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
Wonderful poem I seen your blog Welcome to the Den,............Look forward to reading more of your work,.

Light & Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
this will make a great cw song

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 27, 2006
An excellent song Rose.

One that exposes the struggles that many have with infidelity and compromise. It is a sad state of affairs indeed to be cast aside for another. I have tasted that bitter gall twice in my life.

Country is a good vehicle for your creation here.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg


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