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All That She Lost
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- a journey of loss -


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In his name
she lost hers.

Silver sin -
her knife as a mirror -
to know her face,
the reflection
of the human race
(against mortality)?

Hair and skin hidden,
under the foggy veils
of hideous projection,
she carries a screen
to supposedly protect herself.

Submissive women like her
strive to turn known suffering
into a source of pleasure;
how sad,
how clever.

Every decision she makes
shows that air
is so much heavier
on feminine shoulders,
still, today many have
locked up their own right
to simply complain.

Every step she takes
proves that the ground is slippery
and the only stick she can lean on
is made of strong, meaningless denial.

The best intentions
are the very gravestones
on which she walks:
overzealous perfection
traveling to the heart,
cutting off the carotid artery
until the hemorrhage of emotions
stains her sheets at night.

Where's the crystal box
wherein the hunter was supposed to keep
Snow-white's heart?
Now they display
her stepmother's
bloodred clockwork in it
before burying it
far from sight.

It wasn't the mirror,
but the hunter's gaze
that separated the two generations,
creating rivalry
where once was understanding
and vital transmission.

In his name,
she no longer has a heart.


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 Reviews of "All That She Lost"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 18, 2007
Very powerful...very sad...and beautifully written.

Reviewed by Hira Sadhak
Reviewed on November 18, 2007
A wonderful expression of pain of a lost person seeking solace in love.Like her other poems also is an expression of sadness of like which touches heart of any reader. Congrats for wonderful poem indicating lost rythm of life- there is always a moring day after in poets life and work

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
This is powerfully penetrating right to the soul of the reader. Well done, Axilea. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 2, 2007
I like very much this: ' In his name, she no longer has a heart', it is beautiful!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Those born with the veil are forever doomed to see the other side of the mirror.
Great intensity.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Poor Snow White--cut down by the hunter's knife, though it never pierced her skin. So ironic. Love the "human race...(against mortality)", heavy air, leaning-stick of denial, the foggy veil that's for protection, that really is a projection...it's chuck full of ironies. Very pointed: Submission > lack of transmission > omition of self. Very cleverly written. --Charlie

Reviewed on October 31, 2007
Axilea,

Powerfully penned sadness...well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 31, 2007
"Every step she takes
proves that the ground is slippery
and the only stick she can lean on
is made of strong, meaningless denial."

This is so powerful, yes sometimes when you are suffering a loss, or at a loss, you do feel alone, and stepping takes all your energy. The denial factor does enter in, and that is why it is sometimes so difficult to move forward.

Thought provoking poem, I shall read it again. Thank you for such amazing words.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on October 31, 2007

"All That She Lost" is a profound composition. Its imagery shows poetic-philosophical pictures in meaning and colors.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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