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Looking very Swank
by Seed4ever D. D. → (All Poetry by Seed4ever D. D.)
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Looking very Swank


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Standing at an intersection
Waiting for the little man to turn green
I see my own reflection
In the screens of a passing limousine

Just to manoeuvre around was quiet an endeavor
As it turned the corner seemed to take forever
The little green man is now nervously tapping his foot
I think about crossing but then decided to stay put

The back door of the limo stopped right in front of me
All the windows were tinted there was nothing I could see
As the car idled the electric window slowly sank
Sitting in the back a beautiful lady looking very swank

She smiled at me if to say I am here and you are not
I felt a bit funny since she put me on the spot
Then I leaned through the gap and whispered in her ear
Please drive a little forward your car is on my foot my dear   

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 Reviews of "Looking very Swank"
Reviewed by Samuel Stone
Reviewed on March 28, 2007
Cute story, excellently written, entertaining, and fun to read...
Wishing you well...
Sam

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
Oh, throughout your poem the song "Taxi" by Harry Chapin cam to mind until.......until, your punch line. Loved it.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
Dave,
Excellent poetry! Very creative! I enjoyed reading this.
But your poor foot!:)

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
Excellent my dapper Dave. Limos aren't what they're cracked up to be. They're very uncomfortable, especially getting in or out. We had them in our fleet of tour buses long ago. Never could reason the idea of limos and their fame.

Love.
Susan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
Enjoyed this my friend...great write from beginning to end...loved the surprize ending...read smoothly, loved it!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
Thank you for sharing your wit and humor. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on March 27, 2007


Outstanding composition in imagery and contents... "Looking very Swank"
is a wit-beauty poemization ~ poetized to enchant and inspire.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
Well you didn't need that foot anyway...LOL, very funny, thanks for the morning laugh...Ed

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
OUCH! Those swanky folks are somethin.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
hah! I completely enjoyed this poem, especially the end! good job and thanks for the early morning chuckle

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
LOL, this is a great poem, Dave! I enjoyed this from start to finish, never expecting your twist at the end! Excellent!
Love,
CJ


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