You are getting so good at adding that twist in the end that makes sense to the poem such as you did with "Haunted Highway" perfection in your pen, again.
Amor
I agree with the others about the stanzas being so well written and drawing one into the story unfolding. And, of course, that twist at the end that is your signature forte.
It's good to be seeing you back writing in your best style with your best wit.
Hah! I agree with Regis about the rhyming, and I was working the grey cells very hard trying to figure out the finish of this mighty fine poem, but alas and drat, I couldn't, and didn't even come close. I love this bit of chicanery and deceptiveness to the nth. Bravo.
Now that is some tale, Belle! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I love the flow (rhyme and rhythm as well. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Blod Ties - Fantasy, Romance. Romantasy? A bit of whimsy for the weekend. A naive British tourist John Gormley takes a holiday in the ancient, remote kingdom of Perarboria. He does not suspect that his holiday love affair with a local beauty is desti
A humorous look at the world and life through my eyes.
Follow the author and his wife, as they travel the world …. several times over.
Laugh at their funny stories, self-inflicted crazy events, strange observations, wacky zoo facts and snippets
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
a tale..smiling as I write
Lady Vivian
Amor
It's good to be seeing you back writing in your best style with your best wit.
Ron
Oh!! A fine tale of surprise!! Rhyming well done and fun to read!!
Lady Mary Ann
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Regis