High blue cloudy sky
Friendly breezes meet the eye.
Trees that sway from side to side
Tossing leaves that gently glide.
Diving quickly down to land
Glides across the cool wet sand.
Slides into the flowing river
This late in fall, makes me shiver.
A spider climbs upon it’s back
Moves far from home, forgets to pack.
He lands upon a sandy beach
Heads for a branch he cannot reach.
Out of the tree a robin swoops
And eats that tiny spider ... OOPS!!!!
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Reviews of "Oops!!!"
Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
Very good write dear... Made me smile... ;)
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2003
Not quite liking spiders, I certainly like the way you ended this!
Wonderfully creative fun write!!
Wonderfully creative fun write!!
enjoyed
thanks,
donna.