Bloody Pen (poem) by Chris Rosenau on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 10, 2007

You deal with a compelling theme in your verses here, Crissy. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Verne Washington (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

Very well done.
Excellent well thought out theme that is applicable to a lot.
Liked it a lot.

Reviewed on January 29, 2007

Your pen to write this poem is bloody too. Great poem of conscience, striking, well thought out, and nicely penned.

Brett

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 29, 2007

Poetry at its finast. Well thought and well delivered

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on January 29, 2007

Wow...I wouldn't want that "Bloody Pen"! One never knows where the mind will take them if they have the mind to get them there...
Excellent!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 29, 2007

Crissy,

That's one burden I would never want placed upon my shoulders. When one actually thinks about it it's a lonely job being at the top and undoubtedly thankless.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Quite a sword for a pen. Wonder how it will end? Enjoyed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

multi-layered poem with distinct content and message ...

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Fantastic write...I have many takes on this write...for a moment I thought of a political leader whom was making the decision of sending our young men and women to war...then I thought about those that volunteer to serve our country because they have no family or no one to really care...interesting and very powerful write my friend, a very thought provoking write indeed...another thought is life, life is often like a war going on within ourselves, and a battlefield on the outside! Wow! This will be one that will provoke thoughts for a while...enjoyed, you write on my friend for you are a talented young lady!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Death comes to those who's time is up, a date established even before one is born, so my view of this poem is that someone is chosing people who should go to war and get killed. Great perspective. Victor

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Man this shoots to kill at the murerous leaders, who fail to use restraint.. You ROCK SIS..

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

The ones that do make the decisions should go themselves or send there children to war.They sit back and say yes 'cause it looks good for them and they still get a paycheck.Thanks for sharing Crissy.
Well done,
Michael

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Very well written, Crissy. My thoughts exactly. We should only go to war when our freedom is threatened and end it quickly. The blood is on the hands of those who send.

Ron

Reviewed by Danielle Mundy

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

I really enjoyed this. My first thoughts were that this came from the thoughts of politcal leaders as they sent soldiers off to war, but I agree with Art's view below as well.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Interesting write...it displays kinda like the view of the Spirit called Death and how he writes and takes the many who fall within the battles of life and the places of war...

random thoughts...yet, nice write.....Art Sun...