And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me. I don't know, I don't know where it came from, from winter or a river. I don't know how or when, no, they were not voices, they were not words, nor silence, but from a street I was summoned, from the branches of night, abruptly from the others, among violent fires or returning alone, there I was without a face and it touched me.....from "Poetry," by Pablo Neruda
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"At the Right Time," a Response (c), 2006, Karla Dorman
I know where I was when it came, when it illuminated the dank, forgotten spaces of my soul. Anger and bitterness were embalmed with visions the color of dirty snow falling from brilliant blue September skies. I know where they came from, these painful sounds swelling my eyes; they came from behind the defenses of cemented walls I'd constructed around my heart - it ripped me onto the page, this exposure of healing Poetic light when I needed it the most, continuing from past to present.
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Reviews of "At The Right Time," a Response to Pablo Neruda's "Poetry""
Hi Karla...You are quite a poet, girl! When I saw the vast number you've written, I was amazed. You are gifted in a beautiful way as is evident in your response above. Good work. I'll be reading more...especially T.R.A.P.P.E.D
What inspiration comes from the inspired! Somewhat like music, one intrument answering another's plaintive notes. 'Round in a circle of time expressing life. Just life--which is everything. Beautiful, Karla. Saved...
Oh, Karla. I am with you from word one!! Have to admit it is
impossible for me to believe there have been dank places in
your soul. Dark, okay, but you have t h e most beautiful soul.
There all along, or you couldn't have written this deeply
affecting and. . .p e r f e c t response. With love 'n' {dried}
pink dogwood blossoms from yo Tahhill admirah. . .aka Pea Hooadorezya
VERY well answered, my dear Karla, VERY well answered, indeed!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Oh Dear Karla,
You have written a Masterpiece! This is the declaration from a soul that's wrapped in beauty. I am thankful that the Poetic Light ripped you onto the page. Now we read you in awe.
Awesome! My Muse appeared after the death of my father. It was a comfort then and it is this day. It helps me condition a lot of pain.
Love and Peace,
Susan
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God Bless
Lena
love and peace, Carole
Lin
impossible for me to believe there have been dank places in
your soul. Dark, okay, but you have t h e most beautiful soul.
There all along, or you couldn't have written this deeply
affecting and. . .p e r f e c t response. With love 'n' {dried}
pink dogwood blossoms from yo Tahhill admirah. . .aka Pea Hooadorezya
God Bless
Michelle!
Fee
Love, B&R
You have written a Masterpiece! This is the declaration from a soul that's wrapped in beauty. I am thankful that the Poetic Light ripped you onto the page. Now we read you in awe.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Xxx Dove
Love,
Eileen
Susan
Love and Peace,
Susan
You blew me away with this one; brava!! Challenge accepted and met! WOW!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Supreme poetry from your talented pen...
And a noble response to Pablo Neruda's Challenge...
Love and Light
Peter