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At The Right Time," a Response to Pablo Neruda's "Poetry"
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Where were you?


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And it was at that age...Poetry arrived
in search of me.  I don't know, I don't know where
it came from, from winter or a river.
I don't know how or when,
no, they were not voices, they were not
words, nor silence,
but from a street I was summoned,
from the branches of night,
abruptly from the others,
among violent fires
or returning alone,
there I was without a face
and it touched me.....
from "Poetry," by Pablo Neruda

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

"At the Right Time," a Response
(c), 2006, Karla Dorman

I know where I was when it came, when it
illuminated the dank, forgotten spaces
of my soul.  Anger and bitterness
were embalmed with visions the color of
dirty snow falling from brilliant
blue September skies.
I know where they came from, these
painful sounds swelling my eyes; they came
from behind the defenses
of cemented walls I'd constructed
around my heart -
it ripped me onto the page, this
exposure of healing Poetic light
when I needed it the most, 
continuing from past to present.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~


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 Reviews of "At The Right Time," a Response to Pablo Neruda's "Poetry""
Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
Hi Karla...You are quite a poet, girl! When I saw the vast number you've written, I was amazed. You are gifted in a beautiful way as is evident in your response above. Good work. I'll be reading more...especially T.R.A.P.P.E.D

God Bless
Lena

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on June 15, 2006
a fabulous responce, your pen drips with inspiration Karla...
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 15, 2006
What inspiration comes from the inspired! Somewhat like music, one intrument answering another's plaintive notes. 'Round in a circle of time expressing life. Just life--which is everything. Beautiful, Karla. Saved...

Lin

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on June 15, 2006
Oh, Karla. I am with you from word one!! Have to admit it is
impossible for me to believe there have been dank places in
your soul. Dark, okay, but you have t h e most beautiful soul.
There all along, or you couldn't have written this deeply
affecting and. . .p e r f e c t response. With love 'n' {dried}
pink dogwood blossoms from yo Tahhill admirah. . .aka Pea Hooadorezya

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
excellent choice of form, Karla, and well executed. I, for one, thank God that poetry came to you. Dawn

Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Wow this was a powerful write and a powerful read here, keep these coming and be blessed in doing so
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
A most powerful response, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Beautiful statement and even more beautiful reply. Good work Karla,
Fee

Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Beautiful Karla, just beautiful!
Love, B&R

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
VERY well answered, my dear Karla, VERY well answered, indeed!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Oh Dear Karla,

You have written a Masterpiece! This is the declaration from a soul that's wrapped in beauty. I am thankful that the Poetic Light ripped you onto the page. Now we read you in awe.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Karla, your words are like a fine aged wine..

Xxx Dove

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Been awhile=0). I liked this one...seems to sum up why I write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Brava! Wow! Karla your growth is nothing less than awesome! This is another level for you! Kudo's!Keep soaring!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
this is such a deeply personal and overt response. You expressed yourself beautifully...

Susan

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Awesome! My Muse appeared after the death of my father. It was a comfort then and it is this day. It helps me condition a lot of pain.
Love and Peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
My goodness, Karla! This passionate and well expressed response got my attention! Great work!

Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Wow, Karla~

You blew me away with this one; brava!! Challenge accepted and met! WOW!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on June 14, 2006
Karla
Supreme poetry from your talented pen...
And a noble response to Pablo Neruda's Challenge...
Love and Light
Peter


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