Notes of Pain (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 24, 2006

So sorry to hear you are suffering today. Will keep you in my prayers.

Reviewed on July 24, 2006

Karla, this is the best poem I've seen explaining a day in the life of a fibromylgia sufferer. Been there, done that, hated it, got the T-shirt, left the building.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 23, 2006

Karla, you have captured the essence of this pain really well! We hope that it will pass soon,
love and hugs, B&R

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut

Reviewed on July 23, 2006

Ouch! this one tells a tale of pain well! sorry you have to be uncomfortable!

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on July 22, 2006

I feel your pain literally. I had a friend with fibromyalgia so I know what hell it is. Superb, excellent write. BRAVO!

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on July 22, 2006

How amazing that your pen so skillfully turns screams of misery into songs of triumph. Beyond the agonies of the body, and even those of the mind, the splendour of your soul clearly rules:-) Thank you for shining the beauty of its light.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

You need to smoke some herb, to some it covers the pain quite well...stay well & keep SMILING...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Ouch and i can relate, only my pain is from falling down the steps messing up my ankle last sunday Morning, stay strong and keep writing
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

You definitely write what you feel, Karla, and you make the reader feel it! Good job, my friend. And don't stop.... Stay the strong woman you are....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Karla....

I have a friend with this same pain and there are tomes when I creid for her. You are in my prayers and I will keep you there forever.
Love and peace,

Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

You made me feel it with this poem! I'm keeping you in prayer and pray you will soon be rid of all the misery! Write on Karla!

ET

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Hope you feel better soon.....and I know writing about our pain sometimes do the trick just fine!!

Hey now we need a pic of you and Karen in color....would like to see what the difference between you are......lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Theragesic works wonders................ask Paul Harvey! [it DOES]

FM is rampant, and ravaging, and I acknowledge your personal hell, Karla. You are a strong, strong woman, and an overcomer...I admire you greatly. [and i love your pic!]

I'll step up my prayers for you...Love & ....a tender hug [ouch!]

Rhonda

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

I empathise. Michelle has fibromyalga..

Almost house bound...

Reviewed by Malcolm Watts (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

The music in your chronic pain. Wonderful example of lemons into lemonade instead of bitterness. Malcolm Watts

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Oh Karla so sad to hear you are hurting. It is not easy to face and survive a day like that I know as I have had to face in past and will face again in future. Know that are thoughts are with you.

Fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Dear Karla . . .
I pray for your soon release from the grips of this horrid pain.

Stand Strong!
Richard the Intrepid

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Painful write...hang in there...I hope you feel better

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Sorry for your pain, my dearest friend
Hope you feel much better
my prayers are with you
love and peace

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

I love the analogy between physical pain and a symphony, but I am sorry for your agony. Praying. Stay strong.

Susan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

*OW* LOL

Sorry about the pain; wish there was something I could do; I will pray for you!

Love the pic; too cool! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Sad and little bit chilly when reading but sounds of courage and strength of personality echoe from the depths of this poem. In time you will feel better

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

Karla

Take some anadin...and have a good long steep in a warm lavender bath.

You will feel brand new in time for the DPS Cruise !

Love

Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 21, 2006

It hurts just reading this one. And I hope you are feeling much better very soon, Karla - that cruise is coming up, and your show must go on!