Baddream (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on March 19, 2008

So atmospheric! My spine is tingling. We are all children at heart at times such as this..Love, Diana.

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Excellent write - captures the helplessness we sometimes feel in dreams, Karla.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Don't worry about the weather, it's the mad axe man in the dark you wanna worry about..lol

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

(how do you outpace the sky?)--

Good Question, and Good Poem, Karla!

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

YIKES GEZ Karla Im headed to bed and this one scared me I hate storms....

Wonderful Job of scaring me LOL

Light & Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Just say, under your voice box, "Tweedle dum, tweedle dee ...this old lightening can't catch me...thunder roars and when it's done..the whole dang thing was just a storm".
love,
Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Eerie and spooky recall of childhood fears and the calming affect that only mothers and fathers can provide.

Fee

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

I know this all too well...This was EXCELENT Karla!!

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Must be something in the air, nightmares seem to be everywhere, just seldom as well expressed as here!
Love and Hugs, B&R

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Way to go Karla/honesty becomes you!I felt it like Tinka; when things like that happen we all want our mommy's-God's guardian angel for us.
Much Love,
Sharon

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Ah Ha, Karla, bet you forgot to say your bedtime prayers or had a heavy late-night snack! If that were the case, I'm not surprised you had such a baaaaad dream! :)
You do amuse me with your clever writes, Karla.

God Bless
Love,
Lena

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Great write here Karla
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Gosh Karla ...

My wife and I have been having bloody nightmares for almost a month now. Can't figure it out. I guess others are too.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Oh sometimes those bad dreams are so bad I wake up crying like a baby!!

Well done I felt this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Too many bad dreams around. I hope mommeeeeeeeee came quick. Victor

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Hee hee, this is too cute, Karla! I especially love the ending!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Ahhhhh this is such a cute one especially at the end
I want my mommy.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

You had me fooled on this one Karla. I thought is was going to be about some awful stuff you experienced. But then again, I guess if your a kid, it doesn't get worse than that. Enjoyed
Rusty

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

I don't mind the dark but I don't do that lightning stuff too well.. great little poem...

Myrna

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

Karen

A cry from the heart..
And there is no consolation and comfort quite like Mom !

Love and Blessings

Peter

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

How well you bring up the memories of when we were kids and were so scared of the storm! Very scary, taut poem; you capture the fear well! BRAVA, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister (and fellow storm phobic), Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 24, 2006

i love storms but the wind can be so scary...great flow to your words, karla