Hospital Course (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on November 28, 2006

YIkes, what a write~
I could feel ya' Karla!
WArmest Blessings!
YOu brought your notebook in with you.Great idea!
Powerfully felt here!
A Keeper still~
WArm HuGs,Sheee

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

chilly write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

A stark and chilling poem, Karla. Thank you for sharing it, mon amie. Amour et paix,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

Quite chilling, Karla

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on October 26, 2006

Splendid realism Karla, I hope it's just fiction, excellent write.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Wow Karla, are you there? you could fool me if you aren't! Excellent work! Praying whatevr the case;-)...ET

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Oh Lord, hear my prayer, let me die before I have to enter a hospital. Amen.
Come to think of it I alays have a feeling I'm alive going in a hospital and coming out dead anyway. Realistic poem. Victor

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Very realistic, Karla. Good job! ~~Carmen :-)

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Hospitals aren't all they're cracked up to be, that's for sure. When the body hurts, oh, that can drive you round the bend...

So vivid the description in this one! Well done!

God Bless
LOL
Lena

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

pain this one is so vivid good Job Karla!!!!!!!!!!!

Light & peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

You are bad. The images took me back to my hospital days and the swirling vultures in white. Really loved this Karla.
Rusty

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Bless you Karla...the dark part of pain is temporary. The corner is there...you'll get around it soon enough.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Now this is scary--don't like hospitals like my mom didn't like them either! Yet, it is better to be in the hospital to get well than to be out on the street wishing I had someone who would care.
Much love & hugs,
Sharon

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

You, poet Karla, I salute. nice takeoff from "You, Dr. Martin" which has always resonated with me. quite creative! Dawn

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Interesting. Your talent shines.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Very different type of poem, Karla, but I enjoyed it start to finish.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Alot of raw, good lines Karla!!

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Karla
I can relate on many levels, a great write here, thank you for sharing
Gid Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

Karla,

You have captured the fear, uncertainty, and terror of being in the hospital brilliantly and perfectly; I also love the "biting" needle touch of humor you injected in this poem! Very well done; brava, my dear twin~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your other half, Karen Lynn. :D *Grins*

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 25, 2006

I certainly can emphazize with this one Karla with over a dozen stays in the hospital and operations in the past five years, it scares me for now the nurses remember me each time I go back. You have captured it well

Fee