Delay (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 3, 2007

This one hit me between the eyes...I have felt this very thing several times the last few years...powerful Karla!
peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 3, 2007

One power packed pen to say the least. Our prayers are with you.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 3, 2007

A very powerful write, sweet Karla. What comes to mind when I read this is ... for whatever reason, the Angel of Death did listen, and thank God. Bless you!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Karla you brought tears to my eyes with this one, I too was scared when I learned how sick she was, and she has since been in my prayers, I am glad she is on the mend, and thank you for sharing this
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

AWWWW, Arrows to my heart this write, beautiful.
Your love is unconditional, the best to the two of you.
Wonderful to always stay in the Love the Lord has given us.
Continued blessings here in our 2007.

Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Thank God you and Karen had many friends and loved ones prayers; God did prevail and satan is an liar. I still can't get over she's only 108 lbs now. so little!
Peace,Grace,&Love,
Sharon

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Do we have a say?
Prayer will get God's ear everytime and she had very many, many praying in her corner.
Amen.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Very heart touching write, full of compassion, anger, bitterness, and questions. So glad that Karen is home and improving. Great write! Enjoyed.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Stark reality, written in pain and anger. Well done! So sorry you have to have the experience. Hope and pray Karen is improving each day and all is much better with you.

Love,
ET

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

I can imagine your torment, here, Karla. I would have taken my case to Jehovah, though, for it is He who knowns the beginning and the end, and through Jesus defeated the sting of death. I'm sure glad Jehovah has other plans for Karen. Her work here is not yet finished. Your love for your twin is as it should be.

God Bless
Love, Lena

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Strong emotions come into play when the life of the ones we love are in danger. We seek not to let go and offer their souls and their bodies back to the earth, we tend as humans to want to hold onto them for ever. I am glad you recieved an extension on your sister's life and may it be a long one.

Fee

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

If only we didn't have to suffer. I can understand why the feelings. Thank you for sharing, God be with you, Holly

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

This was very heartfelt, my friend; even more so for you having read it to me. Thank you. {{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Alas Karla we have no say and Death is hardly an angel. One can understand your feelings though. Thank God Karen is on the way to recovery. Victor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Scary to know that we don't really have a say!!

But happy to know our prayers was answered!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Karla,

Your both very special. Your love shows through in every line. Bless You Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

I believe 'our' energy is transferred to those for whom we pray. Yes, you do have a say. Well written Karla.
Rusty

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Karla,

Ooh, this is powerful; this grabs and doesn't let go. Glad I made it through; sorry you had to go through this! Very well done; brava, Karla! Glad all this is behind us now...

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

A beautiful poem of your thoughts during this time of crisis! Know that even the Angel of Death cannot overtake God's intercession for life! Your and Karen's strengths, all the prayers, were heard by the Almighty.

May this New Year bring more peace and joy to the both of you, Karla and Karen.

Micke

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

A very touching poem. When the time comes we have no say, dear sister. It is hard and quite frightening to imagine karen in the ICU. Please pass my regards to karen. your brother/friend in somalia

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

Quite powerful, Karla, and so very heartfelt.

Wishing you and your Twink the best year ever.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

this poem proves that passion is not delegated simply to romantic relationships. Your anger at the times comes through in this work. You, like Karla, were and are very, very strong. May God continue to bless you both.

Susan

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 2, 2007

You had a say, thats why she is still with you, your love kept her here...and we are all happy that did occur...Happy New year ladies, Ed & Rufuz