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Freedom Streets (For Our Troops)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Felix Perry's 'Once More Into Battle Ride' inspired this...thank you, (((Fee))), I hear you loud and clear.


... flags bow in intolerable
sorrow, weighed down with the blood of
soldiers that cries out to be heard:
to be remembered for the price
they paid;  to be compensated
for the brokenness of body
and mind;  is that too much to ask?
Apparently, it is.  While we
rage about the war, the war, the
war, war, war, casualties are
passing by on conveyor belts
into the system of apathy,
to die without dying, homeless
and hungry on the freedom streets
they fought for; the invisible;
forgotten; this, the thanks they get.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (2/28)

 

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 Reviews of "Freedom Streets (For Our Troops)"
Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Moving piece. Thanks, s/henry

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 1, 2007
Such heart breaking truth in this powerful write, Karla
love and peace, Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 1, 2007
Thanks, we need to hear that someone cares, coming back from Nam they spat after us, the same people that cheered up with a paper-ticket parade when we came back from WWII and were proud of us when we came back from Korea.
When your Country calls, someone need to answer.
Georg

Reviewed on February 28, 2007
My heart goes out...every day concerning this issue...it is heart wrenching, might I add.

Thank you for this heartfelt write Karla.
Blessings to you and thank you also for your time served.
From one vet to another vet...still I say Semper Fi

Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
it's a shame when a country neglects those who sacrificed the health of their body and soul in defense of their nation ...

on the money, Karla ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
karla, you always hit the mark when you write of the military! You provoke thought as supposed to and keep us remembering! Kudo's!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
So sad and true
Respect is a forgotten thing
it can heal broken self esteem
pax A

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
Karla, your voice is one we listen to when you speak on this issue. thanks for doing so as often as you do. may we all be led to act in what ways we can. Dawn

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
Outstanding write my friend, touched me deeply!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by The Dove
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
Tremendous, timeless, and touching. Thank you.

Reviewed on February 28, 2007
I pray for our troops daily, I come from a military family, My Grandfather fought in world war two and my uncle in Nam, I know they were both deeply touched by there experiences
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
Very touching we all should thank our troops and give them the respect they deserve. My husband was in Vietnam and what they did for us all should be appreciated. Same with our troops now.
Thanks for this
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
Heart breaking Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
How right you are, I spoke to one outside grand central NY, all i could do was give him the few bucks he needed on a cold december night. I told passers bye they should be ashamed as they were literally walking into him as he sat on the sidewalk, yet they looked a me as if i were bonkers. The sally ally said he is a ligit ex Nam.

Well said Karla, America should be ashamed the way forgotten heros' are treated...

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
It breaks my heart, Karla. I applaud your courage.

Carmen

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on February 28, 2007
Im glad you wrote this Karla. Seems as though we can give awards to people who ask us to conserve energy but not to those who stand in harms way.
Rusty

Reviewed on February 28, 2007
I hear you loud and clear; it's a shame how we treat our veterans! They deserve our respect and support! After all, they are fighting for us! They deserve far better than what they are getting! Send the war protestors to Iraq; let THEM fight!! You touched a raw nerve with this powerful salute to our suffering veterans; God bless you, and God bless THEM! Thank YOU for YOUR time in the Air Force; you are greatly admired by me! I couldn't have done what you did!

(((((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))))), much love, and many, many prayers, your grateful twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

A poetic mission accomplished honorably in this call to JUSTICE and humanity.

"Freedom Streets (For Our Troops)" sings with a voice of reason and breath of respect.

I salute You, Poet.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 28, 2007
A deeply touching poem. With this poem many people would shed tears but still that is not enough. something must be done urgently to give the soldiers the respect and compensation they really dserve. Your brother in Africa


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