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Critical Condition
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From an article in today's newspaper, "VA study: Maintenance a problem", the Associated Press:

"The Veteran Affairs vast network of 1,400 health clinics and hospitals is beset by such maintenance problems as mold, leaking roofs and even a colony of bats, an internal review says....'Who's been minding the store?' said Sen. Patty Murray, D-Wash. ....'They keep putting bandaids on problems, when what the agency needs is major triage. ...." Ya THINK???


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"Critical Condition"

...Mold, leaks, bats
inhabit facilities
meant to be sterile;
bandaids cover
boo-boos that
gap w i  d   e open;
an infection
of mismanagement
runs rampant;
the patient is
in crisis, doctor,
and fading fast:

can the V.A. be saved?

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (3/22)


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 Reviews of "Critical Condition"
Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on March 27, 2007
The management like Mr.Ed enjoy to sit and debate instead of solving. We have knowledge to do it but too many chiefs going around in circles trying to look important. Important and well done write.
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
You are a strong voice.
Rebecca

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Lets hope for the best that thinks will improve!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
I sure hope it gets better we need to take care of our Vets.
Thanks for this wonderful write.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
After 70 years of neglect to the Vets and the facility, high time someone is taking note but will they do anything about it? I doubt it. Only the one that got all the press.

Reviewed on March 23, 2007
I hope so Karla, you're one of the best poets on the den

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
A nation that do not shame for the treatmen to its Veterans is not worth to be called a nation.
Georg

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
What an embarrassing situation. You are right to write about it, Karla -- but also send it to your Congressman and newspapers, TV, radio ... These abominations need to be dealt with.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
I once wrote a report about the bugs we found in a veteran hospital kitchen. My recommendation - clean them up!

Alas, the Washington bureaucrats got hold of the report, and they held it up for well over a year. The reason? They had to debate on exactly what type of bugs they were!

And people wonder why nothing ever changes.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Karla,

Once again we see the forgotten vet. They spend billions to kill people when are they going to spend to save a few? If any have a chance to visit a veterans hospital please do so. I promise you'll be disappointed. Sad but informative write Karla.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Very informative write Karla, amazing what's been swept under the rug or neglected! That's a shame! I hope the etition helps resolve the problem....
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
One of our congresswomen (Jean Schmidt, R-OH2) thinks that the media and the politicians have made too much out of it and that the problems of Walter Reed are overblown. Go figure...you captured it quite well here. **hug**

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
You have brilliantly summed this up with so few words. This has been a crisis in the making for decades. A very sad state of affairs.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
Well voiced Karla! I signed a petition on it. Hope it gets online.
The neglect has been happening for years, it isn't a new problem.

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
Corruption and mismanagement should not thrive in the midst of this most developed country. Everyone should be held responsible for their actions. Critical condition should be read by policy makers and state officials.

Thank you Karla.

Abdullahi

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
The one word that stands out here is "Critical"...these are conditions that can't wait, if it doesn't turn for the better NOW...it will be a dire situation for all those dependant on such conditions SOON!
Well done Karla~ In prayer and diligence
Love and Peace~
kimmy~

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
What a good look at the fading era of the VA.
My sister gets Disability from VA as well.
Thanks for keeping us here at AD informed!
Love to you,
Becca

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
Karla this is so sad the way we treat our vetrans I thank you for the power of your pen to remind the world loud and not in silence.

Blessings, Kove,
Josie

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
It is totally irresponsible and shameful the way veterns who have given so much are given such a low priority compared to the budger spent for example on arms.

Fee

Reviewed on March 22, 2007
I don't think you want me to get started on the treatments of our vet, both by our VA system, our politicans and those who oppose the war, I get angry when I hear what our men and women have to deal with when coming back from the war, its really ashame and I applaud you for speaking up, and for your service to our country
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on March 22, 2007
God, I hope so; the veterans deserve only the very best of what the government promised. It's a durn shame that they are not getting the medical care they earned for serving the nation. The nation is letting them down. SHAME!! ON!! THEM!! A powerful indictment for change; very well done, Karla! BRAVA! Keep speaking out! Maybe one day someone'll listen before the system goes into an irreversable cardiac arrest...

(((HUGS))) and much love, and thank YOU for your service--as always, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
The VA? I'm worried about the whole damned system. We all need to start voicing a loud opinion.
Love,
Susan


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